|Reviews for What a Mess|
| Mirage chapter 9 . 9/28/2017
i did think she would wreck more havok, but still funny
jubei the slug really was cool as i did think, hope he stays around when he finds way around the slime...
so they id make up and he got his fun with light miko power punishment...this guy...really...they are good for each other...
but i think the first order of pusiness should not be to teach rin that it is not polite to spy...but what kagome and sesshoumaru did...and that not all realationships are like there...i mean Rin is only 8 or 10? she may not know much about this things
| Mirage chapter 8 . 9/27/2017
and to what i did write a second bevor...he is stupid and an ass
the slug sounds nice...and a bit like a second jaken
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/27/2017
the best he says...leaving a women with no weapon, no Food, no warm clothing or ways to make fire with no warm clothing alone in the wildness...and then thinking to bed a stupid youkai women whos plan it seems is to catch a big fish sesshoumaru...is he out of his mind and stupid...
when kagome finds him she will kill or kick him and when he is unlucky she will purrify nearly anything in and aroun his Castle in her fury...
| FearMe-LordFluffy chapter 3 . 5/8/2017
Oh my GOD! That last part was genius!. Had me squirming like "run bitch. RU
UUN!" Hahaha. Had me like holy shit dude. You should of listened! Run hahah. Very good writing lad. Very good
| BlackMagicRose7 chapter 9 . 3/14/2016
I loved this story, I'm glad I got to reread it.
| BrightGhost91 chapter 9 . 4/7/2015
This was such a fun story. Thanks for the happy ending!
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/17/2014
I liked that this was meant as a silly story, but I felt Sess was surprisingly in chracter. No one knew what went on in his head all the time really. This could have been it. Great job :)
| munford chapter 9 . 10/31/2013
I love you so much right now
| MyLiloITAChIassasin chapter 9 . 5/21/2013
| XXX-NaughtyFanFictionLover-XXX chapter 9 . 10/15/2012
I don't know how many times I read this, but it is obvious I love this story. Great work. ;0)
| The Despotic One chapter 9 . 5/1/2012
When I saw the last paragraph, I was like "HOLY..She got to watch that! Lucky bitch! D:"
10.5/10. It deserves it! :)
| RubyJeweler chapter 9 . 9/24/2011
Absolutely Fantastic! I love it!
| Anonymouselegion chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
Thank you for making this. Previously I had ingested over 9000 mg of Viaga and had an erection for about 5 hours. Hoping to find new fap material I stumbled upon this site while looking up "man fisting horse anus" and decided to give it a read. Upon the first 2 paragraphs the storyline was so terrible my erection immediately disintegrated. I am happy that my erection is gone but now have permanent erectile dysfunction.
The story itself is absolutely terrible. I would whip my ass with this garbage.
| Dagger-Seishin chapter 9 . 11/22/2010
lol not bad poor kagome tho.
| Ryu Pendragon chapter 5 . 10/30/2010
-eyes widen in disbelief- Whoa, Sess is kinky.