Reviews for Dream Machine
dr-fanma-lover chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
bervo hhm-carly-unknowly-put-her-feinds-at-risk-woder-jem&kaimber-haerd-about-how-stormer-hepled-out-carly-bcsuse-stormer&kimber&feinds-iam-pictuering-aerce&crly-jeam&kimbaer-form-d-con i jaust-carly-knows-she-doing
dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
bervo-the-iade-of-caerly-makeing-a-transfomer/atuobot-named-aerc-is-inposslibe-ulss-one-of-faive-faced-naice-touch-stormer-cood-the-jem&transfomer-crossosover

oh-she's-got-the-power-in-saliormoon-vs-4-saisters
Dr. Thinker chapter 1 . 5/16/2007
Cute story. Love how you brought in Stormer from Jem. You must

had recalled that Susan Blu (sp?) was the voice for "Stormer"

in "Jem" and Arcee in "Transformers"
Seiberwing chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
I think you definitely need some more descriptions in here, instead of a script-like sentence of dialogue every line.

More Carly-centric fic is always good, yes.
VarunaFyre chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
That is an incredible story!