|Reviews for Dream Machine|
| dr-fanma-lover chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
bervo hhm-carly-unknowly-put-her-feinds-at-risk-woder-jem&kaimber-haerd-about-how-stormer-hepled-out-carly-bcsuse-stormer&kimber&feinds-iam-pictuering-aerce&crly-jeam&kimbaer-form-d-con i jaust-carly-knows-she-doing
| dr-fanmai-lover chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
| Dr. Thinker chapter 1 . 5/16/2007
Cute story. Love how you brought in Stormer from Jem. You must
had recalled that Susan Blu (sp?) was the voice for "Stormer"
in "Jem" and Arcee in "Transformers"
| Seiberwing chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
I think you definitely need some more descriptions in here, instead of a script-like sentence of dialogue every line.
More Carly-centric fic is always good, yes.
| VarunaFyre chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
That is an incredible story!