Reviews for Pounce
artku chapter 1 . 11/25/2020
I went and looked up the full version and it was definitely worth it. This was steamy AF! Loved it, took notes etc.
It's-effing-fusha chapter 1 . 3/28/2015
No more?
anonbar93 chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
it is a nice story but can i read more of it please?
Listen To The Dots chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
...That was... That was sexy .. ; w;
Kalypso Fox chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
Hah, I loved this story; it was good the way it is. Though, I would like to see the full unadulterated version. xD
watch-me-write chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
That was really good, even if they didn't go all the way :) Haha, poor Kyouya, completely helpess to Tamaki's adorable-ness _ I really likes it! :3 Hehe, I think I'll go try and find the full story now ;)

Thank you for writing that taster~ _

~Bexmar O
PsychoBabble192 chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
omg... gay guys r normally hot...*dies from image*
oLIVEgREENcRAYON chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
This is very well written, probably one of the few stories with proper grammer-and-such, and is just good in general

And of course I'm going to ask for the location of the other version you wrote of this, lol. ;;
zutarakid50 chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
There IS always next time...;)
ireadtoomanybooks chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
I don't think it's too wordy... Or that it has too many adjectives. I really like it! You will get a PM from me XD Please write more!
CrazyCartSalad chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
such a fluffy, half-lemony goodness of a story...

in a very good way, I assure you...
MooseWoodson chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
Wow, this is really great! And I think your use of vocabulary and wording is amazing. If anyone thinks your "descriptions" are tedious or "too wordy" it's just because they don't understand all the words, lol. _

Great Job! Also, i would really like the full version if you could, please? My email is on my profile I believe.

Arigato gozaimasu!
The Wigmonsters chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Ah, I can totally relate. I was the brightest and happiest little girl when I was younger. Now I'm pretty much goth, and I hang out with stoners, but I don't do anything.

This was really good. I admit myself new to Ouran High School Host Club, but I love it all.
HMiko chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Words are GOOD. You are not too wordy. Don't ever change. lol

Description of the water was incredible... also, tenth paragraph (ninth if you don't count the mantra)... oh. my. god...

'Scuse me. I need to go clean up the blood that just gushed out of my nose.
XxMysticMariexX chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
Awesome story! I totally wanna read the whole thing now.
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