That was a great story, makes me cry a lot, but a wonderful story, very well writen, I think

I cried and laugh and feel angry at many places... I love this! Please keep on writing! :D

I never love a story as good as this when I read that one shot about Katekyo Hitman Reborn!

((Ben was standing on his balcony with his back to the room and Harry slid silently through the almost pitch black room and up behind his brother. He copied Damien's actions from a minute ago and hugged Ben's back and rested his cheek against Ben's shoulder blade since he wasn't really tall enough to rest his chin on his shoulder.))

Yea,, you have turned it into a clishe romance slash fic. And i simply put hate it.
Please put up a Warning in first chapter about to "Lovey dovey brother relationship" I simply get sick of reading it and i am propably not the only one.

This story would have been 100% better if you swapped out ben, and put in a twin-sister for harry instead, at least then i wouldnt get the urge to trow up my lunch each time i see disgusting romantic moment..
Some girls would propably enjoy reading this story as they have this sick fetish for m/m fics most of the time, but us males well we would prefer to not see so many romantic things between males, i sincerly hope you rewrite a minor change into the story.

If you do then feel free to pm me and i will gladly follow and read this story til the end, but seing as it is complete do i doupt that will ever happen.

well story is good, except the part of where you suposedly write about emotions, Seriously ease up on it, you make it all seem like a slash/incest fic, i wouldnt have read further if it hadnt been for the the fact that you put up and made sure for us readers that there would be no pairings in the sumary.

Lovely story. Your ideas about how phoenixes came into being were original and so was your spin on the twin!Harry cliche. I liked Harry's weakness in particular: it made him 'real'. I cried all the way through chapter 14. But I like the way you brought him back to life. The ending scene was particularly cute. :)

Thank you for writing and completing!

Oh my god, the title spoiled it a bit, but I just kept crying through the sad partd, esspecially when each character died. I was sobbing when Harry died but I think this one of the best Harry Potter fanfictions I have ever read

amazing story, and brilliant emotional depth, just brilliant

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This is a wonderful and touching story! I was blubbering at the part when harry died! It was so sad but i love the ending! :)

Hahahahahaha great chapter

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It was brilliant . I love your idea on how Phoenixes are born.

i loved this story, i even cried (which is a feit in itself) i am very happy to have this story in my favs so excuse me while i see if you have any more storys, bye ;)

A very interesting and very sad story! I cried several times when Harry was going through his sickness then his death! It was so sad! I had to stop for a few minutes to compose myself! It may sound like I'm just a crybaby but I have 3 younger siblings and the thought of any of them dying or myself dying for that matter is simply unthinkable! But anyways, I really like your style of writing. You put just enough detail to get your point across without being too excessive about it. I hope to read more of your stories in the near future. Keep up the great work. :D

I loved it! I cried when Harry "died" ;(