Reviews for The Underdog
Lady Bethia chapter 3 . 9/25/2007
Sorry it turn out to be my computer refusing to down load the entire chapters. I really like the story.

Lady Bethia
Lady Bethia chapter 6 . 9/24/2007
You need to fix chapter 5. Still a good story though.

Lady Bethia
Lady Bethia chapter 4 . 9/24/2007
Good so far but please fixe chapter 3. It is incomplete.

Lady Bethia
Kat77 chapter 2 . 5/1/2007
Excellent story telling! I'm really into the Marvel Origin

series. Seem's to me you added more new chapers to where

their needed to be more stories to it. Also, like how

Dog express's like a tough big brother to lil James.

Please countine writing, I like to see how this ends.
iamdaemon chapter 2 . 5/1/2007
Cool story. I like this little peek into a different side of Origin. You seem to have things down pat.