Reviews for Naruto and Hinata: the Forbidden Tales
Radiant Sith chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
nice very good, i hate Naru-Hina pairing, it's just too weird...
HeagyBaby chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Sable Katze chapter 4 . 8/5/2007
well, it would work out if Hinata was more outgoing, maybe she should get some help with that...

oh well, I love the Omake's!
Doctor Yami chapter 4 . 8/5/2007
i read more and more. and i like u less and less.
Doctor Yami chapter 2 . 8/5/2007
if he can live to be 12 years old, eating nothing but ramen, and have the only side affect be being short, i think kyuubi could also prevent some clogged arteries.
dfshie chapter 4 . 8/5/2007
that was hawt.
Tama Saga chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
I really wish you commented on the first chapter and not on the summary.

I also wish you had a better attitude toward stories. Yes, you're surrounded by them, and yes, they aren't real. But don't you treasure even one? From the sound of it, no...


Hmm, this isn't my favorite story. But I find it fun to write this. It's not easy finding a different reason why the two don't belong together, and then I have to weave it into a semibelievable tale.

The quality, thought, and humor woven into the story makes it kind of hard to flame, right?

lost in details chapter 1 . 7/31/2007
...This story is sick and very much wrong. Naruto and Hinata are characters. They're not real people, so who cares if they get together or not? I definately don't, even if I do like this pairing! To think you took time out of your day to write this trash, just tells me that you have a lot of time on your hands and want attention. People like you disgust me. You. Are. A. Disgrace!
DrkKni chapter 3 . 7/9/2007
At first glance, this story looked to be a normal near-crack anti-NaruHina fic. But you have a couple of valid points. I appluad your rewrite of the first chapter, as now everything was made clear and it is my favortie of them as it is the one I could see coming true the most (though probably not in such a comedic fashion...) However, the others leave me skeptical, but they may be just bias talking. Whatever, I have to give you credit for making a good persuasive argument, and you have a good use of humor at the endings of your chapters. Good work, but it'll probably be a while before I read more. This makes me sad.

swartzvald chapter 3 . 6/28/2007
huh, that wasn't nearly as bad as I was expecting, and your reasons were actually valid, kudos
Austln chapter 3 . 5/8/2007
lol i was thinking the exact same kage bushin thing for chapter 2 whatever its good continue with it, c ya!
Pain au Chocolat chapter 2 . 5/8/2007
OMG that omake is fantastic! xD
Gasanechi chapter 2 . 4/27/2007
Nice fic, i absolutely love the morale in the 1st chappie and for the 2nd chappie, well, its kinda sweet and funny at the same time that hinata will do anything for naruto and that naruto also has concerns for her! ehehe! XP

Well, hope you write more stories!


RobotPirateNinja chapter 2 . 4/26/2007
Why doesn't Naruto just use Kage Bunshin?
faern chapter 2 . 4/26/2007
seriously heart attack, this is the guy that have his heart vaporizes by an electrical blade the size of human fist. Yeah that will happen. And wake up prancing like nothing happen

Among the probability of sakura ending up with naruto in the end pretty much nill!. And please just so you know when some hinata-chan psycho fans decided it time to stalk you and pop you in the head with a magnum. The light at the end of the tunnel is actually a flaming inferno that going to roast you like a peking duck. It called hell ! ok and that stalker is noway going to be me just so you know.
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