Reviews for Thoroughbred
Kagome-Is-Kool chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
Nice. It was kinda sad when Darren left poor little Jimmy.
Kiku-chan214 chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
Hey!

This could be a really cool story. You might want to make the chapters a Little longer. Add information and clearify what your talking about. Make sure the readers are able to understand what you're talking about. Try to explain where the setting and be sure to let us know which characters are where and what there doing or saying. Keep it up! I cant wait to read more.