|Reviews for The Hole In His Heart|
| Halan Lore chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
| emptyword chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
Don't apologize; everyone has a first time. And then some have several more times of course. ;) Soubi's quite out-of-character here and it's a bit short to make much out of, but I encourage you to keep writing. Kio and Soubi deserve more love. If I may add this to a C2?
| Genasyz chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
it's not bad at all. looking forward to the next chappie. congratulations on your first fic