|Reviews for Before the Fall|
| Shikiayan chapter 14 . 7/22
Ow, despite of that I don't like slash and I tend to don't see them as anything more than brothers, I find your story intriguing and well written. I liked the fact that you didn't focus so much on LeoRaph and showed Raph's struggle and interactions of all the brothers and made it so much believiable. (Well still think that kind of story would worked more without slash context, but it's only my personal opinion). And to remind me of taking care of bedridden person. Well, I studied and practiced it for 3 years on my nursing studies. So the matter is familiar to me.
Anyway, why wouldn't he be able to walk? It's the pieces of bones and bullet which might be inside and would damage his internar organs? Or would do something to his nerves or spine? Well, if he got proper care like humans do in hospital with all the medical examination etc., he would be mobilized to movement a lot sooner. Because even after surgery patients are mobilized as soon as possible. But, hell, in the turtles' case it's impossible.
I'm glad you wrote a lot of aspects of taking care of immobilized one and made it like reality would be. I'm glad I read it and even I don't particulary like tcest, it's still touching story and the characters weren't OOC. So very good piece of writing, even if 10 years passed since publishing it first. I would be nice to see something from you with Turtles, but now it's little possibility of it.
So I reviewing even if you won't read it.
Greetings. Lilu :)
| CCAdventures chapter 14 . 11/20/2016
I haven't logged into this website in ages and chances are you haven't either, but I couldn't let this go unsaid. The moment I read your authors note on the first chapter I was hooked. I had no idea what I was getting myself into, but this fic was really what I needed right now. I'm in Raph's shoes at this moment in my life. I suffered from medical trauma that's put my whole life on hold and within the last couple of months I've gotten low enough to where I was in Raph's exact spot: laying helpless and contemplating a bottle of pills. This fic was gorgeously written and it really opened my eyes. I'm not going to be better by tomorrow or even next year maybe, but I'm going to be better someday and I have to count on that. I don't know if you'll ever see this, but thank you for writing this fic.
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/25/2016
i... i think you're winning me over to these pairings making sense
| Lucille12340 chapter 14 . 6/13/2016
HOLY FREAKIN CRAP YOUR PURE EVIL! You scared the freakin crap out of me! I seriously thought Raph was gonna do it. I balled like a baby and stayed up all night to read this whole freakin depressing story about my poor raphie strugglin. Ahhhhh you almost gave me a heart attack but in the end you pulled through! Thanks for deciding to save Raph (:
| DemmCounterfeitBandits chapter 12 . 6/13/2015
Beautiful. I felt it captured each of the characters personalities very well. Congrats!
| Snowhite197 chapter 14 . 6/8/2015
This was beautiful. And this:
When the darkness came over him and told him he'd be better off dead, that wasn't something Raph chose. It was something Raph warred with.
I needed this. Thank you.
| NyxLied chapter 14 . 3/1/2015
*claps* what an excellent story, beautiful ending and message. I like you made it so real and human. Very beautiful indeed.
| NyxLied chapter 13 . 3/1/2015
Oh my god...this story is so deep and sad. I can understand where Raph is coming from though, he prefers to end it now instead of losing himself down the road. He also wishes to free his family of the burden. Great story, very sad
| raphielover chapter 9 . 10/17/2014
LOL pinkie swear? thats hilarius! great chapter!
| raphielover chapter 7 . 10/17/2014
no more occward moments like the pee stuff NO MORE PEE STUFF I WANT RAPH TO CLEAN HIMSELF PLEAS!i had to skip some of this chapter because it was to frikken intense seriusly no more peeee! but other than that i love this series!
| Sesshomarusama3 chapter 14 . 10/12/2014
This was a very good story!
| Time chapter 14 . 9/7/2014
| 77757 chapter 14 . 8/20/2013
This was really good :)
I think the ending is fantastic, it ended happy with out being overly cheesy, and the only thing I might would be an epilogue but it isn't really needed.
| goddess-chan123 chapter 11 . 5/16/2013
this story is breaking me to bits and pieces, and now im afraid to read the rest because i dont want to cry. please, i beg you, does it get better? because im not sure if i can finish this.
| raphiecandy3426 chapter 14 . 3/31/2013
I love this story, so much! I want you to continue it, this story has so much potential. ;)