Reviews for Sword Practice
Gracegirl13 chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
What happened to Cloud? And Angeal was WAY OOC.
ErynCross chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
"That is part of my job." XD I like this one and when Zackc said "You two are talking about sex!" I just like it.

Great story and i really like it enough to write a rewiew with my poor english( i'm french sorry) but wasn't it a Cloud/sephiroth that's what it's written but i like it
Sanctum chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Pardon me, Ms. Drake, ma'am? I'm not quite sure why this story, good though it be, is listed under the Cloud/Sephiroth pairing?
RenoBites44 chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
*cough cough* sword practice, eh? lol
DreamWeaver619 chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
Hahaha! That was great funny and sexy at the same time. You've got me to really like the SephxZackxAngeal OT3.

I love the part when Zack just bursts out "You two are talking about sex!" and Angeal and Seph just kind of look at him like, "Well, duh"

That was great! I can't wait to see what other "adventures" Seph and Angeal have in store for Zack.

Keep up the good work!
Welcome to the World chapter 1 . 4/21/2008


Personally, I like Yaoi pairings in FFVII...specifically. The male cast is perfect. ;]

I guess their particular good looks...and homosexual comic reliefs in the game...(Mukki...remember that dandy NPC? xD)
silverin chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
Oh I love it! Yummy trio - but now I hunger for more of them! Really nice, sweet, exciting... Go Zack! ;o)
CodeLyoko chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
Heheh this make me giggle so much XP
Squelettique chapter 1 . 12/21/2007
Oh, my /God/. Like... /shit/.

I need some new pants...

Might as well just review everything else you've written here, too. First of all.. /shit/. I cannot describe in any written language just how... freakin' /awesome/ everything you write is! It's so incredibly.. sexy, and hot, and so detailed, and oh my /god/ you're such a talented writer. I got the alert email for, um, what was it... the Crisis Core drabbles? Like an hour ago, and ever since I've been reading and crooning over your work and how satisfying it is. If y'know what I mean.

There's just the right mix of humor and lust in these, like.. never too smutty (sans the Potion bottle, which was, by the way, so hot I had to go change twice whilst reading it) and never too.. "light". And I love the Lazard/Sephy pairing too
Black-Mariah-Heart chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
That was great! It was funny too which helped me read it. Hehehe, nice job.
UltimateSorceress chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
muwahaah. I like it!
Jediempress chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
Very well laid out. Everyone's 'real' yet the suggestions of future persomality is there. If that makes any sense.
CornCob chapter 1 . 4/23/2007

Adorabley funny!

I loved every second of this one, all of Zack's mystified thoughts and interaction with the two.

this definitely deserves like..23490 sequals.