Reviews for Imperfect
xxkilaxxx chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
luv it plz update soon
Sniper Zero chapter 1 . 4/26/2007
Damn I thought this was a never mind it's good so it doesn't really matter.
rai.09876 chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
Hey, just want to say that I totally love this fic. You're right. I also think that sometimes Kira and Lacus are just TOO perfect, but I still love the pairing. update soon.

good job. good luck.

Evian chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
Nice start. Can't wait how you make of Kira Lacus
quiet one chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
i'm confuse with the start (and i mean the very first thing: lacus waking up from the nightmare) and the start before or after the ending?

anyways...good story, i read the last one (luna x shinn) it was also good, well written and it follow through it didn't leave things unanswered. i hope this will be the same...

(and this might be the first and last review from me since i don't like to review much. .')
lilplayer chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
loved it, please continue, I like the change of Lacus not being so love sick and Kira so tormented, though, these things do exist in your story they are not over done in over-dramatic dialogue and tidious, facetious remarks.

Great job on the first chapter.

Best regardes...
Lacus4Ever chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
very nice! hope you update soon!
LightOfViolet chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
I have to say I enjoyed reading this a lot. Kira seemed a lot like that (thinking of Fllay all the time) at the beginning of GSD, and I was so angry that they didn't kiss at the end. But now I think we not knowing about at what stage their relationship is makes it more enjoyable. Anyway, your writing was pretty good and I really love to read more. poor Kira and his tired soal :((. and poor Luna. Why is she dead?:( Anyway I am looking for your update :)
Anime OO Otaku chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
cool sequel thingy. Lacus is quite angsty :) the first part is confusing but as always, you'll elaborate more. can't wait!
Blank chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
I have to say, I agree with what you're saying in this story "Imperfect". Kira and Lacus certainly care for each other a great deal, though Lacus seems to want to care more in a deep relationship sense while Kira does appear to be withdrawn still. Maybe something you can use later in your story is their encounter on the Eternal in the first season, when Lacus first gives Kira her ring. Take what you will from that, I won't try and write your stories for you haha. Your style of writing is very descriptive and you don't jump all over the place, it was a pleasure reading your first chapter.
moi chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
your writing have really improved (compare to your last one. ) i agree that the KxL relationship is too flawless, so i'm glad to see a fic that explore the troubles under this relationship. looking forward to see this updatec.
Druggieslove chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
interesting! what happened to Lacus?(the beginnign part)
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