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Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 41 . 7/2
Lol. nice story, great job.
TheOldMasters chapter 41 . 6/29
Inspired. Brilliant. Transcendent. Getting to read this story was a genuine pleasure. Also painfully gut-bustingly funny. I mean, just…wow. Toshiro is only the very beginning. You wrote every character with such flair and mostly with perfect on-the-nose precision of their base characterization. Aizen, Espada, Rangiku, Shinigami, Ichigo – whoever you cast your gaze upon did not escape the amazing characterization you bestowed upon them.
And you wield every character in such an incredible manner to advance the plot. I mean, the plot is pretty much ‘how can the universe screw with people’, and there were noticeable shifts in your style over the years that scrambled even the idea of a plot, but the story nonetheless manages to coalesce around that central idea - by finding the most ridiculous yet still somehow plausible path forward.
I'm not sure if you've seen AtLA, but this 'universe hates us' idea is very linked to Sokka. And like Sokka, Toshiro is the sane person desperately holding together the world made up of insane people, who himself is dysfunctional. It was wondrous following Toshiro on his quest for...well, for it to end, whatever 'it' was. And of course, Soi-Fon was the perfect counterpoint to Toshiro, her arcs being driven by her insanity having been mistaken as sanity until it was too late.
Thank you for sharing this gem with us.
Unidentified chapter 5 . 1/29
Heeheehee. This is still funny, although I do hope Yachiru hasn't accidentally (or deliberately) caused the death of any students with her delaying.
Unidentified chapter 4 . 1/29
Oh dear. Well, next chapter will probably involve other characters, so maybe Hitsugaya will get a break.
Unidentified chapter 3 . 1/29
Aww, poor Hitsugaya. This was still funny, though. I wonder if Matsumoto will ever grow up enough for him to like her back.
Unidentified chapter 2 . 1/29
This is still really excellent humor. I probably need to reread this analytically, to improve my own comedy, but I'm having loads of fun just reading it normally.
Unidentified chapter 1 . 1/29
PffHAHAHAHA. Only good things can come of this.
Guest chapter 41 . 1/13
This is literally the funniest thing I have read on this site for a very long time
Aquawyrm chapter 41 . 12/11/2017
Aaah, that was delightful. The last time I tried to read this story, I gave up at some earlier point because it was just too silly for me. I have, since, grown up.
gabe.d.clark.1997 chapter 41 . 11/19/2017
That was just... wow. Was it wrong of me to pretend that this was an actual filler arc? Because This should be real.
anon chapter 41 . 10/15/2017
dogbertcarroll chapter 41 . 9/17/2017
Excellent work, made me laugh from start to finish.
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 9 . 6/27/2017
I recoiled so hard from Toshiro's nickname I almost knocked over my couch. That was scary funny.
OriksGaming chapter 11 . 5/30/2017
Honestly, this caricature of Ichigo . . . he's actually fairly intelligent, just very stubborn. But I suppose I shouldn't get worked up over it, considering this is a crack fic.
Zmeiss chapter 1 . 5/4/2017
Sorry, I could not resist. This is a rough translation from Russian.

Today the campfire the troop meeting
Around the campfire, there was formerly the barracks of the ninth...
I told you not to smoke there boys!
What a shame, but what a joy for Kenpachi!
For training more space
That is something we will be fun!
Previously, we used closely...
And Shuuhei? -And move!
And when you learn to think of the brain?
When exiled in the 12th brothers-Shinigami!

-The guys who burned my bed? -Well, he...
-Yumichika, who asked to surrender? -Well, he...
-Yumichika, you're with him or with me?
-Well, I...think by tomorrow!
What is your captain dope burned?
Isn't that,
Fry a little now he's a nigger
Poor Tōsen...
We the whole squad rolled up in a blanket
Can I go take a look?
Do you have enough?

Aren't you ashamed to disturb my captain?
Let otospitsya though Unohana. What?

Aren't you tired of it, kolis Fukui-of taycho
Both silent, not get more!
Yes, since because of you I now have no place to sleep
Look at the squad extra bed
What are you doing? We have a squad of the lack of walls and doors!
The more beds, but there is a place on my...

With condition one you stay overnight
What are you up to, bald, my power to experience?
The glow of the conflagration will come the captain
With zanpakutō open will meet him there
Will last him 5 minutes - welcome to the squad!
You here and the sake and poured on the bed to shelter...
But if after 10 minutes you're still alive-
Welcome to Cenpatico on his left shoulder.

Today the campfire the troop meeting
Around the campfire, there was formerly the barracks of the 10th...
I told you not to smoke there boys!
What a shame, but what a joy for Kenpachi!
For training more space
Booze will also be in style!
Previously, we used closely...
And Rangiku? -I Rangiku!
And when you learn to think here anyone?
-When to 1st get us hooked Yamamoto!

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