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![]() ![]() ![]() That was SO MUCH FUN! I would like to be constructively critical, but I just want more mayhem! Please continue. Pretty, pretty please? I especially like the last line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG _ That Freak'n Rock keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! Funny! Shocker! where the 11th goes, chaos follows! Poor Shiro-chan! keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, he went bonkers even sooner than I expected! Rangiku's punchline was gold by the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That. Was. GREAT! XD I especially loved Hitsugaya's imagining Mayuri's reaction to all those new 'test subjects.' |
![]() ![]() ![]() *cracks up* Just the comments by Hitsugaya and Zaraki (I especially loved the unending brawl one) and the ending to this . . . love. Hope you update soon xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best laugh I've had all week. xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it! i like it when hitsugaya though what would happen if 11th squad go to 12th squad , it was funny! yay! hitsugaya kicked zaraki butt! i hope u update next chapter quickly! ciao! |
![]() ![]() ![]() “So… does this mean I can have the rest of the day off?” She asked asked hopefully. best line ever |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, this is too fuuny. Update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Where there’s smoke, there’s fire. Where there’s fire, the 11th Division is probably involved." XD Oh, /gods/. That...is a worrying excellent description right there! “Because it’s ALWAYS you three. Everyone else in the division is too afraid of me to do something this stupid.” XD *gives up entirely on the commenting and just falls out of chair cackling helplessly* |
![]() ![]() Note to self: Never ever ever ever EVER eat and read Bleach fanfics at the same time. I just snorted chips up my nose. Your characterizations are spot-on, especially 11th division's (I loved the "same responses to different questions" thing). And Hitsugaya WOULD want Nanao as his vice-captain...but, as you pointed out in the story, he's too fond of Matsumoto to get rid of her ;). Oh, you MUST continue this! I look forward to reading more, even if it means snorting another food item up my nose. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's a fanfic right there..I was dying...keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL poor Hitsugaya *evil Smille* |
![]() ![]() ![]() At the 10th division? This is gonna be great. Hitsugaya won't last long without going completely bonkers of course... Maybe have sad Kira and maybe even Shuuhei attend too, poor captain-less vice captains need some consolation too. Dare I say, this is the beginning of the end of Seireitei? Aizen will be out of enemies real soon. Anyway, enough babbling. Please continue this story! It's good. |