Reviews for Outcasts
Annoyed chapter 2 . 6/29/2014
Proof read your work. Stop using "her" when it is meant to be "me".
Guest chapter 2 . 2/28/2014
It's great know that there are still sasusaku shippers out there. Your story seems like it has a good plot, but your grammatical errors, he/she/I/your errors, and your improper use of their/there/they're makes me unwilling to read on. Please don't get discouraged and call it quits. Learn from your mistakes and produce fanfictions with a more adequate level of English. Good luck.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/7/2013
Great story but those grammar errors are something serious
yoitscho chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Punctuation and grammatical errors.
PrincessoftheShadowsofDestiny chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
dude you need to learn to stay in either 1st or 3rd pov i spent most of the time in this chapter trying to decipher what you were saying!
KillsMheSlowly chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH 3 . 3 Lolss
i love this story so much :] i dont even want to read the sequal to its finish so please finish it :]
Ur an amzaing writer :) soo please dont stop :)
LadyChelsea50 chapter 50 . 10/9/2012
I really like this story!
sasusakulover44 chapter 20 . 7/8/2012
lol naji has feeling
sasusakulover44 chapter 17 . 7/8/2012
grrrrrrrr stupid neji hes just a cold hearted b******
sasusakulover44 chapter 11 . 7/8/2012
lets all celebrate they kissed so there defentiley in love btw i love people fighting eith there inner its so funny
sasusakulover44 chapter 10 . 7/8/2012
LOVE IS IN THE AIR WOOOOOOOOOOOP LETS ALL PARTAYYY
sasusakulover44 chapter 9 . 7/8/2012
looks like sasuke is in lovee
sasusakulover44 chapter 8 . 7/8/2012
gosh the drama do much drama -crys-
sasusakulover44 chapter 4 . 7/8/2012
ohhhhh the drama
sasusaku-4everr chapter 51 . 4/18/2012
Hey that was a great story
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