Reviews for Eclipse: My Own Version
Skye-Blue 101 chapter 4 . 11/13/2012
I like it so far, but I just feel like this is too much. I am a young writer, and if there's something I've heard many times, it's that characters aren't invincible. It seems like you didn't give Bella any faults, or weaknesses.
japer x alice forever xxxx chapter 13 . 11/6/2009
GREAT storie :D
barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
sounds good
EBforever chapter 18 . 3/14/2008
I love the story, but Bella would never tell her parents she was a vampire.
Consulting Centurion chapter 24 . 3/13/2008
it was pretty good but, it went WAY to fast, everything just happend in a blur and there was not real conflict

but other than that it was a good story
gvlove23 chapter 18 . 9/8/2007
I like your story but there is just one thing that confuses I read the Twilight series vampires couldn't sleep. And Bella slept, so therefore I'm confused.
Mariposa Allverez chapter 23 . 9/7/2007
luved you are a good writer
LORA chapter 18 . 8/31/2007
Brivolbn7Q chapter 23 . 8/31/2007
Interesting chapter. I couldn't believe Bella forgot her mom! Haha. Early honeymoon...sweet.

Jennarae chapter 23 . 8/31/2007
is that the last chapter? :(... (sad face, modified)
Mrs. Quincy chapter 22 . 8/15/2007
PMS is all I can say I loved it!
The Greeter of Darkness chapter 22 . 7/13/2007
Update! I want to read the rest of the story! :] chapter 22 . 7/3/2007
OH the suspense! ITS killing me! please update soon! im so glad ur able to now!
ash26asr chapter 22 . 6/12/2007
please CONTINUE...!
shattered-picture-frame chapter 22 . 6/10/2007
what possible problem could they have had with vampire queen? i'm very upset that they prevented you from updating sooner *steams out of ears*

i liked the chapter though.
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