Reviews for Lockdown
gov the scoffer chapter 3 . 9/12
Where is the rest?!
gov the scoffer chapter 2 . 9/12
Activated charcoal, great for snake bites,ingested poison,bee stings,allergic reactions,and a whole list of other things...use it in real life and in my story's all the time,nice one bro,
PS this is probably the best story on fan fiction,other than mine of course...
I had the tmnt go to a hospital ,it was fun...
gov the scoffer chapter 1 . 9/12
Cool,like all the action...
narutofanficlov321 chapter 3 . 8/16
u soooo need to update this it's sooo good u have me in tears right now
TheRedScreech chapter 3 . 8/1

This is a magnificent endeavour! It's beautiful in its angst and desperation! I love how you've fleshed out the characters, how Don's remembering memories, how Leo's running true to form, how Mikey is now their strength. It's extraordinary! Please, please, please, you must continue! You must finish!

Pretty please?
Fairy-x-Heart chapter 3 . 6/6
This story is so intense! I was anxious while reading it, but I love the suspense! I sincerely hope you will be able to continue this one day. :-)
montanagirl1138 chapter 3 . 1/26
are you going to update? pretty please!
AlessandraDC chapter 3 . 12/17/2015
Would love to see the rest of this story! Great writing, character development, suspense... How does it end?!
pownxmanonnie chapter 3 . 10/6/2015
please say there will be a new chapter! because i need a new chapter!
LazyPanther chapter 3 . 8/26/2015
I was looking back for oldies but goodies that I may have missed when I came across this one. This is AMAZING good! It's terrifying and heart-wrenching and so well-written. The way you describe the attacks makes it so easy to picture and Leo's pain is palpable.

I see you haven't really been active here for many years. But I hope you still get the reviews that are still being left for this story. Maybe you've outgrown fanfiction by now but I still want you to know that your work is still appreciated. I really hope you're doing well wherever you are and I hope that someday you make your way back here. Leo's life is in your hands! ;)
Guest chapter 3 . 7/8/2015
Longing for Leo here again.
This is STILL, after nearly a decade, the best nail-biter of a tmnt fanfic I've ever read. And I'm still holding out hope that you'll finish it, or at least give us another chapter or even a rough outline, just so we know how it ends. As another reviewer noted, your writing style is so good and your plot so complicated that I really can't imagine how you intended the story to end. In the notes at the beginning of ch 3 you mention that you've already got a good 8 pages written, so perhaps you could just start with that? Really, even just a rough outline of where you saw this story going and how it ends would be a wonderful gift. This story deserves to be told, and so, it would be really awesome if you came back to it. Please...
roni chapter 3 . 4/12/2015
I'm really enjoying this story so far but I would love to see how it ends. Any chance of that happening?
Winged-Wolf-Tsuki chapter 3 . 3/5/2015
Oh my word you've left me on the edge of my seat your story telling is spectacular I can hardly want to read what happens next the levelof suspense in your writing is palatable I really hope you get a chance to update soon XD
Littlefish chapter 3 . 2/21/2015
This is VERY good. Your writing style is very fluid and your plot is intense. Is there any chance at all you will finish this? I hope so. I am really interested in finding out what happens.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/30/2014
This is so so good! Can you please write more?
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