|Reviews for Peaceful Waters|
| beans492 chapter 17 . 4/4/2011
Good story so far, I liked the variety of characters used and all the side relationships/emotions that are taking place. The only peoblem was that this was the first story that I have read without reading reviews beforehand, and for that I paid a dear price. What a let down to go through all those chapters, only to be totally let down because you quit on a good story. It is a shame because you have a gift for writing and I know this was your first one and all, but to stop it altogether with no apparent reason and not update for three years? That's sad, and a waste of your talent. I'll check back in sometime to see if u finished it, but you unfortunately lost someone who was instantly a fan. Take care.
| Iroka chapter 16 . 3/25/2011
Good to hear about your side stories but chapters with just author's notes are against the rules. I'd hate for an admin to see this and delete your story. So in case you ever decide to get back on this, you'll know. xD
| Iroka chapter 14 . 3/25/2011
This is a story I don't mind rereading, I'm coming across some parts I don't even recall! It's so good it makes up for your typos and the fact you never finished this. ._.
Just a few things I can point out on the top of my head.
"Sai. Where is the teme anyway? I want to talk to that bastard."
Okay, Japanese lesson; "teme" means "you" it's a very rude way to say it. It can be said like "bitch" or "bastard" but you're still using it wrong.
You misspell a few things. For instance "lets" should be "let's" and you misuse "your/you're" from time-to-time. There are others but I can't quite recall them, I'm sorry. I doubt you even read this anyway since you gave up, but just in case. xD
| amber-rita chapter 10 . 2/22/2011
If Genma was real...id do him
| dsjklf chapter 17 . 1/25/2011
Please update soon. You're story is fanfreakintastic!
| Eviline chapter 11 . 1/3/2011
My god what is that persons problem? She was in her period, dumped by her boyfriend or maybe just extremely grumpy? :P
| angel897 chapter 17 . 11/29/2010
i love this story a lot and whish you would update it please think about doing so kay
| Naruangirl16 chapter 11 . 11/14/2010
Im on my phone so I dont feel like logging in all the way, but thats my ... I really wished I knew what the word het meant, I tired looking it up but there were so many results. But now I think it means yaio right? I dont think u should use het because theyre alot of people who dont know what means... But good story :-)
| luckienumberten chapter 17 . 11/12/2010
2 years really! come on ~ UPDATE!
| Iroka chapter 7 . 11/5/2010
You used 'to' when it should have been 'too' and 'your' when it should have been 'you're'. Besides that, it's GREAT! I read this story so long ago and I came across it on my favorite list and decided to reread it. I love it.
| TearsOfMusic chapter 17 . 9/14/2010
Hmph...I'm sorry but your story got confusing...I just finish reading it and I didn't get it...Genma bi! Sakura kissing other people and still with genma! Genma kissing boys! All confusing and crap...not saying its bad its kinds good but its too confusing with this and that...
| Cheeky Smiles chapter 17 . 7/31/2010
What can i say? We all are perverts! lol *applause* wonderful just wonderful! well done on the Lemon chapter! Can't wait to see what will happen at the dance! Update soon, puh-leez!
| baiek chapter 17 . 7/19/2010
oh please update. please come back. this pairing is so uncommon and youve done a wonderful job. you deserve many more reviews :)
| alanasometimes chapter 17 . 7/18/2010
| BlackOnyx83 chapter 17 . 6/12/2010
wow i can't wait for more i really hope you finish this story it awsome plus there's not many with this pairing