|Reviews for Broken & Dead Inside|
| BubblyShell22 chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
Wow. This sucks that you aren't finishing it. You don't suck at fan fics at all. You're very good at them. If you weren't, I wouldn't have reviewed as many as I did. Please don't give up on this. It has so much potential, and if you leave it here, it just won't feel the same. Sure, we can use our imaginations, but it won't be the same as knowing how it really ended. That would be like J.K Rowling never finishing the Harry Potter series and leaving us at the third book. It would be incomplete and frustrating for those who are fans of hers. The same goes for you. Don't give up on this. You really are a good writer. I hope you'll read this and know that there is one fan of yours who really loves your writing.
The Bubbly One,
| foolishangel87 chapter 3 . 7/11/2009
im not going to lie...im sad to hear that there wont be an ending to this story..it was one of the better stories that was ont his site and trust me i have read a lot...but it was good while it lasted
| Renna33 chapter 2 . 5/14/2009
this is so sad (well written, but still sad) please update when you can!
| foolishangel87 chapter 2 . 5/1/2009
another fantastic chapter..and im begging you to update it..it was great...please please please update this sotyr..it is so wonderful and it needs an ending
| foolishangel87 chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
amazing story..it broke my heart...cant wait to read more
| barbiedoll chapter 2 . 12/28/2008
Wow! This fic is so choked with emotions...I feel overwhelmed! Looks like you are going to end all the suffering for Jeff...sigh...I love him..couldn't u make it less painful?
| stace chapter 2 . 3/9/2008
hey good story update soon and can you please make matt and jeff figure things out and become great bros again it makes me sad to think of my two fave wretling bros fighting but before why not make matt cut himself and someone finds him in a pool of blood and jeff comes to see him at the hospital and tells him that he is forgiven just a suggestion
| SyntheticNyte chapter 2 . 1/30/2008
Oh, your evil! Poor Jeffie! You wicked wicked person...I love it! Made me cry :sniffles: Update! Pretty please, I wanna know if Matt gets his head out of his ass!
| ItchweeedHardyGurl17 chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
The way you capture Matt's and Jeff's emotions brought a tear to my eye.
Please update soon I really want to know how this plays out.
| Eve-Tuscany chapter 2 . 12/6/2007
AWESOME FIC DUDE!
Hope you update soon, it's very interesting.
| BlackWingedAngel1991 chapter 2 . 11/26/2007
Good part can't wait till part 3.
| JNHwwe chapter 2 . 11/26/2007
I lurv it :) please keep it up ... and to let you know you are amazing at this ... carnt you do both editing and this *puppy dog eyes* ... am really gunna miss your writing ... please please please re-think dropping writing X much luv X
| DreamWeaver619 chapter 2 . 11/26/2007
Oh my god, that was so sad that made me cry.
I'm glad you wrote this chapter, it explains a lot of Matt's actions in the previous chapter. He was hurting and he wanted Jeff to hurt too.
I'm glad you had him come to his senses at the end. Hopefully he can make amends.
I hope poor Jeff is okay. PLeas, please don't go for the suicide angle. Just about every fic with depressed emo Jeff involves him killing himself and Matt finding him just too late.
Please be more original, you're a much better writer than that!
I can't wait to see chapter 3.
| BlackWingedAngel1991 chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
omg this is such a good story plaz continue it. I would love to see the video.
| DreamWeaver619 chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
Very emotional and well written, but I just can't agree with the premiss.
I don't see Matt just abandoning Jeff like that, even if it was true and Jeff was on drugs. Sure, Matt would be disappointed in Jeff for choosing that road, but not this angry, cold-shouldering.
I think if Matt suspected Jeff was on drugs, and his brother denied, he'd probably make Jeff go take a blood, urine or hair test to see if Jeff really was taking drugs.
I'm sorry I just don't see Matt turning his back on Jeff like that. If you love someone you don't abandon them in their time of need. And there is a lot of love between the Hardy brothers.
I do agree though that Jeff did fall into some rough times with himself (with or without drugs, I don't know), and you captured that very well in this story and in your video!
I loved your video by the way, I'll leave you a full comment on youtube, when I get the chance.
Maybe in the next chapter you could have Matt come to his senses and realize that his brother needs him now, more than ever.