|Reviews for Back to the future|
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 53 . 2/21
I was going to point out some things that I feel desperately need to be fixed, but if you're already on top of it, then I'm greatly looking forward to seeing what you've done. :)
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 50 . 2/21
"I was a slave once, I will not become yours." BEST LINE IN THE FIC! 3
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 47 . 2/21
Squid Lake, huh? *snicker* I had similar reactions to the Corillian Royalty names.
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 45 . 2/21
This chapter bugs me. They had a perfect reason, perfect chance, and a perfect alibi to take out Palpatine. He wouldn't have been expecting it...I don't see why they didn't 'accidentally' let him go or something. Perhaps make him show his true colors? It just doesn't make sense.
Ah well. I've mainly enjoyed what you've done with it so far in any case.
| WPUrchezem chapter 7 . 1/28
This story is tedious and it shouldnt be, plus come up with some other lines than those from the movies because i know the lines and it frankly boring. I shall not be favoriting you and your storys for this reason.
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 17 . 1/16
I ran into a similar problem when I did my own time travel fic, but "BBY" is "before the battle of Yevin", and as it hasn't happened yet, there's no way they would tell their time like that. ; So, I think it would be in the 900s and AR (I think, not a hundred percent sure, but I know it's after the Ruissian Reformation), probably 988, truthfully.
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 3 . 1/15
You switch from past ('Said') to present tense ('laughs') a lot in this chapter and it's very...distracting. Also, I'd like to see Anakin say his own words, and not Obi-wan's, or at least say things in his own way. Also, if we're reading this, we've seen the movies, so you don't have to say/do things exactly like the movie. It makes reading it tedious. That's part of the challenge of a fan-fiction, you have to find a different way to say something to make it interesting. Internal monologue is quite helpful there. :)
| marthakun95 chapter 52 . 1/6
I truly loved reading this story, too bad it didn't truly happened, I would've loved for Anakin not to join to the Dark Side.
| DoctorSeverusSkywalker chapter 53 . 10/6/2013
I know this story was written years ago but I have come across this and spent the last few days reading it. This was truly an epic, I don't care about how poorly you may feel this was written.
| Pokemon Trainer Josiah chapter 32 . 4/5/2013
you are a messed up person
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/2/2013
So freaking happy that you put phycology or whatever it is spelled into the story. You just made my day! Thx and your writing rocks!
| Tenages chapter 3 . 3/22/2011
Really? Luke beats Anakin Skywalker, one of the best lightsaber duellists in the galaxy, in his first ever sparring match? Just hours after he picked up a lighstaber for the first time, and after only a brief practice against a pathetic remote? Really? I mean come on, that is one of the most completely retarded things I've ever read in a fan fiction.
It's analogous to Yoda losing to a youngling. No actually it's even more ridiculous because the younglings have at least basic knowledge of lighstaber combat and instruction with the the force. It's like someone picking up a sword for the first team beating a fencing grandmaster. It's never, ever, going to happen. Period. No matter how easy Anakin was taking it. Just asinine.
My god, that was so cripplingly stupid that it ruins the story right there.
| TS3KayMarie chapter 1 . 1/18/2011
Just wanted to let you know that I read the whole thing and it was amazing! It took me two days to read it but it was totally worth it! I give it a 5 star rating!
Loved the story!
| I Believe in Molly Hooper chapter 53 . 12/29/2010
this is such a good story good job:)
| Pooja Naberrie chapter 47 . 11/30/2010
I'm loving the story and don't want it to end however, is shimi really important because shes a bit annoying in anakin and padmes relationship because she is all ways hanging around them. But thats my only criticism.