Reviews for Burn
ArmoredSoul chapter 11 . 9/16/2017
I know this hasn't been updated in a while, but in the name of all that is holy, this is AMAZING.

I have never seen a fic that broaches the horrors a broken, damaged man scrambling for control in the face of a world remade as clearly and devastatingly accurate as this. Padme and her defiance, the ruination of Vader, the Emperor and his machinations...

Forgive me while I scream in horrified glee at this monstrous masterpiece.
Guest chapter 11 . 9/1/2017
this story is incredibly good and seems like it would be even better if continued. you haven't updated in years but I hope you do sometime!
1GreninjaWolfBossDeath chapter 11 . 6/9/2017
Please! Please you need to continue!
RebellionPrinces chapter 11 . 5/9/2017
*Insert Darth Vader's "NOOOOOOoooooooOOOOOO!"* Poor Padme!

Wow! You're a brilliant writer. I know it's been years since you updated, but can I please,
pretty please with ice cream on top, get one more chapter? Everything is perfect so far, I love it! You did a great job picking out the names Claudius and Odile, too! You're amazing, *epic song begins to play: "DON'T STOP! BELIEVING!"*, or in this case, writing! You also did a really good portrayal of love/commitment versus feelings/attraction,
too!
Please keep writing or I will literally go insane,
A fangirl and aspiring writer who adores dark and twisted AUs with good plot developement like this. (screen name Rebellion Princess ;))

*Epic song finishes playing*
Guest chapter 11 . 4/25/2017
It's been at least three months since I last checked this, and still no update!
Stacell72 chapter 11 . 3/21/2017
Ahhh.. How I wish you'd finish this story, but with all the time that has passed I know you won't. This was a good story though...
Skygirl chapter 11 . 2/18/2017
Hey there!
Still waiting for an update . . . anytime now!
Not to pressure you.
Skygirl chapter 11 . 2/4/2017
Hey there. I don't wanna pressure you or anything, but this story is really suspenseful, and it needs a happy ending. So anytime u feel like updating, that'd be great.
Skygirl.
Skygirl chapter 11 . 1/31/2017
And just when I thought things were getting better!
MY SUGGESTION:
MY NAME IS REALLY BRITANNIA, AND MY VERY STUPID SUGGESTION IS THAT YOU ADD ME TO THE STORY, AND LET ME KILL PALPATINE! AND SOMEHOW, ANAKIN IS FINE, AND LOSES THE SUIT, AND EVERYONE LIVES HAPPILY EVER AFTER, BECAUSE OTHER WISE, THIS STORY WOULDN'T END MUCH BETTER THAN REVENGE OF THE SITH! PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON BEFORE I LOSE MY MIND IN THE SUSPENSE.
ON SECOND THOUGHT, ME AND ANAKIN COULD TEAM UP AND KILL PALPATINE. OR YOU COULD NOT ADD ME TO THE STORY AT ALL, JUST PLEASE KILL PALPATINE.
This is amazing! Please kill Palpy! Also, it wouldn't hurt to somehow add Ahsoka. Whatever you do is fine, these are just my opinions. Please update soon. Seriously. Skygirl. (Britannia)
Skygirl chapter 10 . 1/31/2017
You are a great author. I thought life was about to end, but things are looking better. I'll read the next chapter, and if iit doesn't well, I'll offer you a suggestion.
Skygirl chapter 9 . 1/31/2017
Hey, this was good. I'm going to read the next two chapters, and if the story isn't over, I have a suggestion.
Skygirl chapter 8 . 1/31/2017
That was unexpected. Obi-wan should've brought Anakin to his ship berfore he got burnt, instead of staring at him and yelling. Then, Anakin wouldn't have legs, so he couldn't resist, but he could get new ones and save a lot of trouble. By the way, you didn't update in four years?! I'm glad I found this story when I did, because I wouldn't be patient enough to wait for that long. No offense. This is the best. Funny and sad at the same time.
Skygirl chapter 7 . 1/31/2017
I knew he was up to something.
This is very suspenseful.
Skygirl chapter 6 . 1/31/2017
I wonder what Palpatine is doing with Anakin in his therapy sessions. Sounds suspicious.
This is really good and entertaining. You're awesome. Have a nice day!
Skygirl chapter 5 . 1/31/2017
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