|Reviews for Babylon|
| Lalaith Yamainu chapter 1 . 6/17/2014
| BerserkerNobody chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Awww, i wuv it!
| shaid chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
I really loved that; it was sweet and funny without being cliched or syrupy. It also gives me faith that there are still good writers here. Some of the grammar I've encountered tonight has terrified me.
Thank you for sharing and good luck with more!
| marwamarwa chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
I always thought that Mori was the only one calm enough to really be able to understand Haruhi's bluntness. I feel that this wasn't really ever explored.
Your writing is lovely; they way you've included Haruhi's translations and her confusion over simple things. It's perfect.
And Mori is absolutely adorable.
| Aryenne chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
well I'll be damn.
| PenAndInkPrincess chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Aw! I love Mori-sempei! (I love Kaoru more...but...eh...) Great job! You captured him perfectly.
| ambellina447 chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
After I'd read the first few lines, I was afraid you'd forget about that great language thing quickly, because it's what would happen to a lot of fanfic writers, but you kept it going until the end, and it made so much SENSE, everywhere... and I love how Mori said so much in so little words.
"(And she figures it just might mean the same thing.)" - Awesome :)
| Ele Goddess of Elements chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
VERY very cute :)
| Midnight Secret chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
So sweet and simple... Lovely story.
| SinDoll chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Simple and sweet
and all those other things that make a great Haru/Mori
| Proof of Nothing chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Aw! That's kinda cute. )
| Vida Loca chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
Amazing work! I love your writing style, it's really something different. And the ending and especially the last line just too cute for words! XD
| dr. sluice chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
| Darknessdawns chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
That was an interesting story.
| Destiny Writes chapter 1 . 8/31/2008
Fluffiness that mould make BunBun look shameful.
Loved it lots