|Reviews for To Claim His Prize|
| Mashdana chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
well dear, what to be said...first of all, watch out for you spelling and grammar. f.e. their is a possessive form for 'they', I really think you meant there and I wouldnt have brought this up if I hadnt found the same mistake twice. I wonder if you are using a beta? sometimes is better to have someone editing our work from a well intentioned critical point of view. as for the plot, not bad. but I partial on this one. I dont really buy Jareth falling for OCs! I hope you dont take any of this wrong, I meant no disrespect for your work whatsoever, but I thought those things might help you improving your style!
thanks for sharing, keep the good work
| Adrienne Valentine chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
I read up to the part where it said her name was 'RedhairedDarkness', then I stopped. Sorry. Even if she's an OC, I mean, come on, that name is LAME, no matter what.
| Anamin chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
That was really fun :D I do enjoy Jareth being Jareth, no matter who he's with :D
| notwritten chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
| Skyrere chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
This is excelent. Good Job!
these one shots can be difficult to pull off. You do splendidly.