|Reviews for Mother's kiss|
| Vampire Princess Yuki chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
| Sapphire Nymph chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
im teary just reading this...
| Anise Nalci chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
Aw, brotherly love is always win!
Little Shuurei being cuddled by mother Shokun so sweet!
| J Luc Pitard chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Sweet story and good sentiment. I like Seiran's character as a young man, somewhat uncertain in his new role with a loving family.
My criticism of your writing though is that you need to break up your sentences. There's a stilted feeling to them and it would be a headache to diagram. Also, each sentence doesn't need it's own paragraph. Especially in the short pieces, you might want to work for flow. That said, you seem to be a prolific author and I look forward to reading more.
| harmony chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
This has to be the sweetest Saiunkoku story I've read so far. Very very nicely written! Good job!
| HoshiNoTsuya chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
Such a lovely fic *.*
An example of the purest motherly love, poor Seiran he misses his little brother T.T
I'm so touched!
Keep on writing!
jeje esas líneas fueron en inglés, espero que estén bien escritas, de lo contrario te ofrezco una disculpa U
| midorihimesama chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
this is really sweet!
| arraveaan chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
Aw! Your story was very touching! Poor Seiran!
| neko-chan chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
very sweet,i love it!
| Althea SaDiablo chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
I've been meaning to leave you a review and I keep getting distracted before I can do so. In any case, this is an exquisite little jem of a fic- I've really enjoyed it and have reread it multiple times. There are a few small issues due to writing in the present tense, but overall it's very clean.
| SkyblueSunshine chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
Very, very nice idea for the fic!
| Riana1 chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
This is adorable and you highlighted one of the more interesting aspects of Seiran- how did he adjust to the lady of the house when is own mother was so apatethic towards him.