Reviews for Rain All Day
RakeeshJ4 chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
Yikes!

The first half of the story was pretty solid. Plausible, humorous, and engaging to read. But the second half...well, for my tastes, it veers too sharply from 'amused tolerance' Sakura to 'Hallmark Valentine's Day' Sakura.

She gets way too emotional, and way too open about it, too fast and in the wrong circumstances, IMO. If someone she knew had been gravely injured or even killed, for example, well that can stir up "OMG we've gotta HURRY!" responses in people, realizing time is limited. But here? I can't see her going from amused tolerance, to taking him out on a date, to holding his hand, to staring and blushing at him, to getting touchy-feeling, to apologies and confessions of love. Too fast, too fast!

This reader, at least, much prefers the first half of the story.
KalliopeStarmist chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
Daw. So cute! .

(I really love this song, too.)
wwwwwww chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
So CUTE! X3 I love it! Nice job Emmy!