|Reviews for A Shiny Bauble|
| Silent Sage chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Haha, I really like this take of how or why InoShikaChou decided to pierce their ears.
| Midnight Memories chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
LMFAO! HILARIOUS! XD That was so well done!
I loved the beginning and the ending, when everything was dramatic and angsty. Poor Asuma, we all miss him terribly... *sniff*. Anyways.
But the read treat was the middle of the story! Hah, poor Naruto "ARE THOSE SENBON?" lmao. And Kakashi's comment of "I didn't know you had a feminine side, Asuma..." ROFL! XD
Just a thing- whats a KIA stone? I'm guessing its the memorial stone where everyone who dies gets their names engraved, but why is it called KIA? o.O
The fact that you put the team's way to wake up was very cute! _ Heh, also very well in character! Choji just running out, then remembering his snacks and coming in... Ino just breaking stuff because she hurries too much, forgetting to put on makeup... and Shika. That was priceless! XD His mom spooks me, reminds me of my own when I don't want to get up in the morning... o.O
I loved how you kept everyone IC also about the party. "Sasuke sulking in corner" lmao. Yeah, that's sure. Thank God you didn't have Sasuke jumping around in excitement or I would've had to harm you! XD heh. So well done. You have the tendacy to to pull off things that most authors couldn't. Like an anime birthday party... wow! D Some people just butcher it and (like I said in Twin Tessens about some characters crying) just make it look pathetic. You, on the other hand, make it very good and believable.
It wasn't lame. Maybe a little bit cheesy, but I don't care! I live on cheesy stories! It was amazing, congratulations.
| Dolphingirl32173 chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
Sarah: *unable to keep from laughing everytime she tries to speak*
Shikamaru: that had hurt.
Ino & Choji: *point at Naruto* tell him that!
| TWNJ chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
This was interesting, like i was saying in an other fic (unles you did it aswell) it's always good to see some background to the characters. I also liked how you made Yoshino have the clan ability too. could you please write one about shikamaru his first time using his clan jutsu or his dad teaching him or the first time he killed a person and 'became a man'. these stories havn't been touched on yet and it would be good to see what you make of them.