Reviews for Leaves of Yellow, Skin of Blue
Baccan chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
That was really sweet. And original I might add. :)
faberryluving chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
that was good :)
qwAEUI chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
I think this fits Hermione perfectly. It's beautiful.
Lindsaylbb chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
sweet and delicate
phuryism chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Captures the ambiance of the war rather well, but fluffiness makes everything seem brighter.
delete45680986 chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
The feelings that you describe in your story are very intense. Hermione seems to be sinking slowly into despair, but Luna is always able to intervene at the right time to stop her.

The atmosphere surrounding the two girls is almost suffocating, in contrast to their final admission of love that eases their minds.

I like the idea of Hermione that starts to realize that the world is not just about books. With Luna at her side she seems stronger and ready to overcome any obstacle.
fuckface69 chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
I love it. This is just such a perfect Hermione/Luna! It captures their relationship perfectly. Just one French correction, I think; as they're both girls, it would be ma amoure and ma amie? Perhaps. Then again, I suck at French, so you know... :D

Love the story, love you. 3
BlueStrap chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
I liked this ) it was very cute 3 And you're French was correct for the most part.

Mon amour my love

mon ami my friend, but since Luna is female you need to add an "e": Mon Amie

Mon ami(e) can also refer to girlfriend or boyfriend too. So it was very fitting. )
Killingmemory chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
Loved this. Beautiful little short piece.
roflroflrofl chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
Honesly one of my favourite femslash stories on here.
Broccoli-xxxx chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
I adore this. Well-written HermioneLuna - well, actually, well-written femmeslash sometimes - is quite hard to come by. Going in my favourites. : )
Peepshow chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
I like the way you wrote this, and the French, even though I don't speak a word of French. It's cute.
Kore-of-Myth chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
Oh sweet!

Keep Writing!
Mione of Ravenclaw II chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
Very well written, poetic story. I like how you manage to portray the depth of Hermione's emotion in a short span of time.

Great work!

Jamie Redsontes chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
C'est correct. Je parle un peu francais, parce que je suis en classe de francais deux, pour le deuxieme fois.

It's correct. I speak a little French, because I am in French 2, for the second time.

I liked this story, c'est tres genial! (it's really good/cool)
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