Reviews for Spiritus Mundi |
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voldemortova chapter 11 . 11/5/2011 I wanted to write you a consctructive review of this fic and here I am, staring at the screen, not knowing what to say to you. I should congratulate you. I've read dozens of really well written stories with great plot and I even had my favourite I thought I'd never betray but never in my life have I seen a fanfic that would be so close to perfection, really. I'll start off with your writing style; you carefully pick the right words and splatter it onto your canvas. As I was reading through your story, I felt like I was watching a painting with a dream-like quality. The narration, the words... To me, Harry's life seemed like a dream (or more like a nightmare) while the time he spent with Tom/Voldemort had that air of reality about it. I will waste no time on praising you for your writing style as you probably heard it dozens of times already. I said I wanted to congratulate you, though it's a bit of understatement as I wish I could just buy a big bouquet of red roses :D... It was the first time reading a story hurt but hurt in a surprisingly thrilling, pleasureable way. Your story was as ravishing as Tom's kisses and just as much seductive. You evoked in me feelings different than those pushing you to call a story "cool" or "cute" after reading it and forgetting all about its existence. I think it'll be haunting me, forcing me to think about things you brought to daylight in your fanfiction. Your story was simply beautiful. There's this quote by H. Rollins, starting with the words "You are beautiful like demolition", I had in my mind while reading it. I think it perfectly describes relationship Harry had with Tom. I'm sending you lots of fangirl love. :) PS: I sincerely hope you won't choose to spoil the ending by explaining it, I personally loved it. PS2: I've already read some of your other fics and I had to say, I'm in love with you as an author. :D |
Kasia chapter 11 . 5/13/2011 I don't understand why it's not more popular - it's simply amazing! Thank you for writing and posting this. |
sweetiiey chapter 11 . 3/16/2011 Nice fic, but could you please explain the end? |
Shadow Lily Potter chapter 11 . 1/7/2011 An original story! Something new is always good to me. |
Obscene Cupcake chapter 11 . 12/22/2010 yaaaay . such a happy ending. the weasley is dead and voldy really has feelings. |
lilbka chapter 11 . 10/7/2010 I'm so confused,but in a good way.I loved every minute of reading. |
reeby10 chapter 11 . 8/12/2010 This fic was just... wow! Every chapter had me on the edge of my seat, wondering what would happen and it was great! I love how twisted and convoluted their love was while still having a sense of peace and perfection. There certainly were some surprises though, I wasn't expecting Ginny to be horcrux! The ending makes me want more, like I wish they could just go away somewhere together and be happy. Maybe they do :D Anyway, I loved this fic! |
crunchynoodles chapter 11 . 7/2/2010 i am so confused... but this is an awesome story, and it reminds me a little bit of another story i cant remember with the same crazy manipulations and relationship :) definitely worth reading |
Lady Evans Potter chapter 11 . 3/7/2010 Lovely. Weird twist of the matter, but quite enjoyable to read. |
Nyx Myst chapter 11 . 12/24/2009 Oh, this was just fantastic. Just what I needed to take the tension away from a stressful holiday day. ) |
123-321 chapter 11 . 10/24/2009 nice |
YellowJacket69 chapter 11 . 8/20/2009 Captivating... |
Toast and Stitch chapter 4 . 5/3/2009 Continuing in wonderful procession! I've read some fics where reason gets lost somewhere in the cool idea that once hooked me... in favour of wishes and fantasies... and I'm so glad that I'm not seeing that! YAY PLOT! XD |
Toast and Stitch chapter 3 . 5/3/2009 The child in him has come out to play - oh Voldy, you naughty child! Silence of the Lambs... I love that movie... ...when I read this fic... my eyes seem to glaze over and the words meld into moving pictures... it's so rare for a fic to be so good that you can actually see what's happening... To the next chapter! |
Toast and Stitch chapter 2 . 5/3/2009 Why were you so surprised over the number of reviews? This is a fabulous fanfic! (an f? o.o!) Hermione was absolutely stunning in this and I just... wow...! Harry got a kiss out of Voldy and it's only chapter 2! ~cheers~ Wonderful, my dear! And even more awesome is being able to picture Ginny's ghost-like mouth whispering "Don't kill me" Chills! :D On to read more! |