Reviews for Predator
MiScHeViOuS.fAiRy63 chapter 2 . 2/23/2008
OMG! This is like my fave vamp story ever. You include awesome details that really help you see what's goin on. You totally have to make another chapter. I hate cliffies. Like you could have them go back to the club like a week later and have a hunter try and kill Sakura, then have Sasuke get really mad and let there be this all out battle between them. I totally think that Hinata should be a vampire. That would be so unbelievable awesome
CharryBlossom chapter 2 . 1/7/2008
Lovely...lovely...but really unhealthy with the Naruto and Hinata part, but works for me and it is clearly working for you, so don't spoil your talent, update soon.
lady blitzkrieg chapter 2 . 12/14/2007
you know, i think you'd be very good at doing a sasori/sakura fanfic.

but, thats just my opinion ;)
SakuraHaruno64 chapter 2 . 12/2/2007
I like it! Please update soon!
Cookies321 chapter 2 . 11/30/2007
I will tell you the truth. This is my favorite story. Out of all the ones I've got in my profile. Keep it coming with the updates. And lets see how this turns out.
Laura-chan chapter 2 . 11/30/2007
It's getting interesting :) And I liked it when Sakura thought about how much she loved Sasuke :D
codykat chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
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sakura6606 chapter 1 . 6/14/2007
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Cookies321 chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
mwhahahaha this shall replace my need for lemon cause i found one that scared the heck out of me so now im completly stoping reading lemons so horror will do please updat! PLEASE!
EternalxBlackness chapter 2 . 5/8/2007
I like this...is the gray-haired man Kakashi? If he is, then is he going to be an important character in upcoming chapters if he lives? And I have one more question. Did you get a lot of your ideas from Twilight and New Moon? It sounds like you did.

You didn't screw up the story, but sometimes your verbs don't agree with your nouns. Also, you sometimes put both present and past tense verbs in a sentence or paragraph when they should all be present tense.

A plot that I suggest might be...hm...Oh! Since there are "hunters", then they obviously know of vampires, right? So Kakashi survives the fight and he goes on TV. He reports that the two little holes in the man's body (the man in the beginning of the chapter) were made by vampires. Conflicts between vampires and humans emerge, and finally, they break out in a gory war. It will rain blod! Muahahahahahahahaha! The city, and possibly the world (your choice of who fights the battle-world or only Konoha), gets bathed in blood. There are more humans, but the vampires are stronger. Who will win? Again, your choice. Possibly it will end in a simple treaty. Okie dokie, I have to go. Keep on writing! By the way, I added this to my alert list, so I'm expecting another chapter...lol. Jk, you don't have to make one if you don't want to. Thank you.
xxxemiko.itooshixxx chapter 2 . 5/5/2007
update pls!
Fedah chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
Tight! Awesome first chapter, Sasuke and Sakura make excellent vampires, especially Sasuke! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! Keep up the good work! )