I like it when a writer includes different points of view, especially when the Winchester's are involved since they have such distinct and differing takes on things. However, I also don't mind when a story is told by just one person.

Welp, this just made my day, evening as it were. I was completely enthralled by the story. The poor ghost boy and the bad brother and our boys... I loved it so very much. You made the story come to life and I felt connected with the story. I was worried, frustrated and happy. I loved the move Dean did with the goldfish. Its such a great big brother move. Thank you for your hard work and dedication. Thank you for a great story. It is greatly appreciated.

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Dean's move with the goldfish made me laugh way harder than it should have. I love this story for the expertly done parallels and the seamless interactions between the boys. I applaud you for your writing skills and your ability to create characters outside of those we see on the show that, while important only to one case, have depth and thoughtful histories. Very clever and sweet.

GOD this is just the freaking best i love this fic so much

Read this through in one sitting. Started at 2am. It is now 4:17am. Glad I'm not working tomorrow.
I cried a few times.
Am going to be playing some board games with my baby sister tomorrow. Poor dear idolizes me. I feel like such a jeeerrrkk for how I treated her yesterday.

Now you don gone and made me cry!

Danny brought up good points about Sam.

Dean is essentially Sam’s parent. And a child thanks their parent by being successful good human beings. But Sam doesn’t do that. He goes against Dean’s wishes and drinks demon blood until he’s power hungry and insane. Sounds like a crappy thank you.

Sam is a self absorbed evil jerk.

Loved every minute of the story!

Bro, this.

Aw poor Danny. My heart hurts for him. Great story.

AWW! that was so sweet and perfect! Thank for the lovely read!

I couldn't stop reading this. Except, I had to. Like four times. Had to go to bed, had to go to work, had to make dinner, etc... it seemed I only had small bursts of time to read this and it drove me nuts. I couldn't stop thinking about it. Every spare minute I got I was reading this until I finally finished. This was a very insightful story. It was believable and warm. It drew me in and kept me wanting more. Extremely well done. I look forward to reading more of your work.