Reviews for Blind, But Now I See |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa. Nicely done with the doc. And the ghosts. and Every kind of face off you can imagine. The dynamics were great between everyone and this played out exactly how it would have. So in character that I could HEAR Sam arguing for Drew and Dean grumbling about everything. OH. Forgot to mention but in the last chapter when Dean was yelling at Drew? Totally got shivers. That was so well done and Dean's older brother persona had never shone so clearly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oooooooh very nice. Really good confrontation here with Danny. You did a great job making that conversation really convincing as you went through his entire range of emotions as he began figuring things out and understanding what he wanted. Sam's always going to win a tug of war over Dean, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhhhhh very nicely done. Your flashback sequences flowed really well and made a lot of sense with the story. Nice job getting into Sam's head when he's on the good stuff! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter. I mean, not so awesome that Sam's arm is busted up that much (yeesh) but the back and forth between them was really spot on. So well written. Wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww man, I really like how you've begun. How Danny's story unraveled and paralleled so much with Sam's except in the part that really really mattered. So good. |
![]() ![]() awwwwww loved it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, thanks for the write & share :) I suck at reviews, lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't normally write reviews when I like a story, even though I should, but I REALLY liked this story. It had all the mushy brotherly stuff I wish I could see and hear on the actual show. How I wish Sam and Dean could have these necessary dialogues. I super love it :) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() that was... AMAZING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really well written awesome job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw i love it. it was great in sams p.o.v it was just def. a new fav of mine :) |
![]() ![]() OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. Danny is awesome. I hated Drew. Loved Sam and Deans relationship. Very cute...(you portrayed them well. Exactly like the real charactor). The last chapter made me cry! I can not picture Dean being insulted like that! Just no! I'm probably blind like Sammy, but I picture Dean as the cool kid. Popular in school. Can do no wrong! Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was wonderful! I really enjoyed reading it. Love the way you captured the relationship with the brothers. Thanks for writing :) |
![]() ![]() Poor Danny. *bursts into tears* |