Reviews for Unexpected Destiny
Guest chapter 71 . 8/4/2017
It's been so long! I hope you're alright. I wish you'd update, the story is so very close to ending and I'd be really sad if I didn't get to see what will happen in the end :(
MCRDanime chapter 71 . 7/31/2017
Oh men it been 5 years since you last update this story. I really like this story so please continue it. Pretty please. Update again soon! Hopefully.
sapphire100 chapter 1 . 1/14/2016
This is absolutely amazing! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Scarlet Mystic chapter 71 . 10/16/2015
Really enjoyed reading the story hope you can update soon. :D
C. Ciel chapter 71 . 6/15/2015
Please update!
Charlyn Rose chapter 71 . 3/11/2015
Hey there, this story has been marked as one of my favorites, it has been a long time since you have updated your story. Pretty Please you just have a small why to go and then the story is finished. Please update soon.
Rinku Fan chapter 2 . 9/8/2014
threshold not treshold, come up with not elaborate, no matter not mattering. I loved this 3
Neko-Mitsuko chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
raven-haired... is awkward it should be raven(-)haired girl/youth/woman.
I've (only) played (the) whole (game/thing)...
that kind of movie or those kinds of movies...
raised watch not watch, raised.
couple of inches, (as she was)...
brown orbs (that) were...
because the (last) thing Rosie wanted...
not -a thunder boomed- just thunder boomed...

I love Rosie's mom's name and your English is pretty good for it not being your primary language. I look forward to the next chapter that I'll read later today.
HimeGee17 chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
I absolutely love this story! Such a shame it hasn't been completed. :( hope you find the needed muse/inspiration to finish this story! I want to know the ending sooo bad! I love SquallxRose forever! Ahahaha!
KarasuTengu.Kirin chapter 71 . 7/9/2014
Its been two years and I suppose your not going to update anymore... but I love this story and I don't EVEN play the games. The way you portrayed their hardship, the battles and the eventually romance. Everything was very realistic and not gushy or fake. I love Squalls character and your oc Rosie.
Failisse chapter 71 . 4/19/2014
I don't usually bother reading OC fics because the majority that I've seen seem to make their OC's Mary Sue-ish. But for yours you actually planned it out well. Your OC, Rosie, seems to have learned fighting and magic at a reasonable pace, and she's not some super powered heroine, which is good because that makes her more real. Also, the way that her and Squall's relationship developed seems realistic too. It was slow and steady and it took a lot of effort to finally bring him out of his shell, and I respect your ability to write the relationship in that way because it doesn't come off as fake. Your writing style is not bad, but you may need to work on the spelling mistakes. I know english is not your first language, so maybe you should get a beta for your story who can help you with that? Either way, this is a very good story and I applaud you for being able to hold my attention with it and actually like it. Good job! I can't wait to read more! Please update again soon.
Crystal Blue Butterfly chapter 1 . 1/4/2014
Hi!
Great chapter!
I can not wait to see what you have planned for later .. so ...
See you later!
DeliciousCarrot chapter 9 . 8/5/2013
Really, you have 40 minutes and you decide to take a nap. For shame! I'm loving this SI Fic, so much potential too bad you never go around to finishing it. Your OC is cool too, a bit too fangirlish but that's easily overlooked. With regards to the girls profound good luck, I commend thee.
Maxxus Herald chapter 71 . 7/13/2013
Man... I decide to check up on this for the first time in a year and half, only to find that I missed the most recent update! X3

I hope that chapter is coming along well. I'm really looking forward to it! D
Akina Tsukana chapter 69 . 3/7/2013
I think I reviewed earlier chapters a couple of years ago and to see that the story is still going is amazing! I love everything up to this point! I love how you put your own spin on the story! I hope you let Laguna tell Squall that he's his father because it seems like Squall still has no clue or if he does he could care less at this moment because he's only thinking about Rosie.
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