Reviews for Inept
The Last Deathly Guardian chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
Heh...that's totally Sasuke right there. The little bastard. I don't really feel any pity for him in this story. And as Naruto said, he is 'twisted'. Right there in the little part of his freakin' insane mind. I mean, you made it seemed like he wanted to get on with Naruto. And Sakura should have realised already that bastard doesn't love her. Heh, pathetic. all in all the best fanfic portraying Sasuke that I really enjoy seeing,
TaintedAngel chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
This makes me wonder if I should be happy he left or not. Hm...-ponders-
Kamaete chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
O.o I LOVE this. ABSOLUTELY love.
Absolutely LOVE. Yeah. .
This has an awesome amount of angst and Sasuke being an ass. I enjoyed very much.
I also like how you made Sakura and Naruto react. it is rather fitting. .
shikamaru's fangirlxxx chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Hauntingly in character.

It seems Sasuke has just gone too far now; so far he doesn't even realise it any more, and his friends have no choice but to give up. They can't bring him back, he is too broken to mend this time.

And for naruto that must hurt more than anything because he swore he'd never give up. Iruka saved him from ending up like Sasuke and since then he has been trying hard to save anybody that was falling. He never gave in, but now he has no choice. He can't win this time.
soynerve chapter 1 . 8/11/2007
Most of what I wanted to say has already been said by your other reviewers. So I'm just here to give a couple of comments and let you know that yes, I enjoyed it.

Everyone's perfectly IC alright, but i get the feeling that Sasuke would actually be stronger than that considering the affection Naruto can give to almost anyone, especially him. This is fanfiction after all, so since you have decided to 'evaluate' Sasuke and twist him up in your own feasible way, I have to say job well done. You've also managed to highlight the impact team 7 had on his life (probably the only other important thing besides Itachi) and his attachment to them.

And oh, I love that SasuNaru moment. His pleasure, eh? Tsk.
CherryShadowZ chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
Wow how did I miss this one? What to say, what to say.

I loved it? Its hard to explain and much easier to list but I don't think thats fair. Lets start with Sakura. Her role in this fic was awesome, she was logical and oh so in character with her feelings. She respected herself which was the most important thing in her part here. She didn't let herself be used.

Naruto, Naruto...he was mature I suppose I could say. He handled the situation very well and considered not only himself but the others involved especially Sakura. He was so insightful, realizing things about Sasuke that he himself did not.

Speaking of Sasuke...*sigh* he's just so fucked up, his proposal surprised me and yet at the same time didn't. His lack of tact I think was what was most shocking not because Sasuke himself lacked it but just because of the plain bluntness of it all. He was so callous and uncaring of Sakura's feelings and so forceful and sure of what he was saying with Naruto. Then again he was so forceful he might have been just the opposite, panic stricken with the idea that they did not hold him in enough regard to fulfill his wishes without him pressuring them. He's a complex character sometimes I think more so in people's fanfiction than in canon. Nonetheless his canon complexity is what allows the fans to further explore possible mental and emotional intricacies.
liggyloo chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
Actually, this is the first time I've actually seen 'Sasuke' in fanfics be this close personality-wise as Sasuke in the Anime/Manga. Congrats.
milkthepanda chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
“You don’t get it. You are mine. She is mine. I have nothing else left!”

That was definitely the most intense part of your story. I'm actually disappointed that this only received one review. A very different take on Sasuke's character, and probably more realistic as well. I admire your style of writing, with your ability to take everyday situations and make them adorable and thoroughly enjoyable, even though it is angst-ridden.

I like this story a lot...will most definitely reccomend to other more "serious" readers. By the way, the ending was fantastic. It left the reader with a satisfied yet haunting feeling.
Kaikouken chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
I was stalking my beta, Simple-Minded Idiot when I came across your name and that in turn led to this fic. Now after that needless information, I want to say something about this fic. Which, in fact is the reason I am writing this but I have yet to come to the point and knowing myself that’ll take a lot of time *sigh*

This fiction was calling me to eat... I mean read it. I was skeptical about the whole SasuSaku thing but read it anyway, since you did say non-romantic. I enjoyed the fic despite it being so angst-ridden, at least in Sasuke's context. It is quite sad, because Sasuke is inept. Inept at accepting things, at loving, and at forming and keeping those bonds. And Sasuke is very possessive, for the people he is close to. I mean look at Itachi obsession of his.

His possessiveness for Naruto and Sakura is not very apparent yet, but it will manifest itself sooner or later. The way you depicted it in your story was pretty and very nice. I won’t be surprised if Sasuke one day proclaims something like this in the manga.

On Sakura, I am almost tearful that you didn’t bash her. I mean I hate it when people bash her and she was so IC that it hurt! You captured her character perfectly and same is the case with Naruto.

As you mentioned in the last line, Sasuke was colder than he should be. In the recent chapters Sasuke has finally started to show that yes, he is a human after all. If you read manga you’ll know. But he is still socially retarded and there is no doubt about that.

Anyway, the fic was beautiful despite the way it went. The ending was promising and I loved it!

Great piece of work! _