Reviews for A New Beginning
SlytherclawDevin chapter 45 . 1/29
Kate sems to forget that she planned to have sex with Jack. He didn't seduce her. She's just refusing to take up for her own actions.
SlytherclawDevin chapter 44 . 1/29
Kate is so arrogant it almost hurts.
SlytherclawDevin chapter 42 . 1/29
No Melissa on blame yourself. Or you, will! Kate is a slut.
SlytherclawDevin chapter 39 . 1/29
I now want Melissa and Will to get together. I fucking hate Kate. She truly is spoiled.
SlytherclawDevin chapter 36 . 1/29
Oh god...
SlytherclawDevin chapter 29 . 1/29
Didn't she say she was 33? And her dad still acts like this. Better yet, both of the girls live with their parents?
Blueberryymuffin chapter 43 . 6/19/2014
Yay I've been mentioned! Wait, blueberry muffin, nope my mistake please continue...
Nixie the Bloody Pixie chapter 16 . 7/23/2013
Oh Will and Jack in the same room is guranteed to become worse than a showdown between Sephiroth and Cloud!... although Cloud would probably curl himself into a ball and whine about his emotional problems... Good chappie! Luv the story!
Nixie the Bloody Pixie chapter 12 . 7/23/2013
I believe that is what you call mind-fuck.
Nixie the Bloody Pixie chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Good chapter. Really intriguing
HeartlessVampireGirl chapter 20 . 4/7/2011
...Kate better not turn into Elizabitch. Sooo not cool.
Jacquelina-Comm chapter 25 . 2/28/2011
What was up with going from the lights going out in Melissa's house, to them sitting in the summer heat and playing with ice, then back to the storm?
BlackTreaderWolf chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Good
It'll Be Anarchy chapter 12 . 10/20/2008
OMG i love this story its so great - love the way you describe the characters and how Jack & will are in modern times - the way they react to certain things is great!
Nichelle M chapter 60 . 9/25/2008
Aws to will proposing!
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