Reviews for O Mine Enemy
silverangel116 chapter 61 . 5/9
Love the story and can’t wait for the next. Please add me to your list to be updated!
Guest chapter 36 . 5/7
Such a good chapter. Just what I needed today! I was feeling teary eyed about just general life stuff and retreated to my bed for some alone time. To be able to sink into fiction and let loose my tears about something happening to the character is so incredibly healing. Thank you, this back and forth trust building is beautifully done.
Guest chapter 61 . 5/7
Hi, first of all i want to say that I absolutely love this story, thank you for such a captivating journey. Obviously, I've read your note about sequel, but I have to ask you. In which time you are going to come back? I have been checking that page every day for many months. I just can't wait anymore. Please give me any hint, that you didn't leave this fanfic.
clarelissy chapter 61 . 4/14
Thank you so much for this amazing story!
DarkRavie chapter 61 . 3/30
I really enjoyed reading this story. Loved the parts when Harry met with himself in his mind. I can't wait to read the sequel!
LyricalLazuli chapter 61 . 3/26
Hello! It’s been ages, I know. I’m starting to realize I have a serious aversion to letting good things end...

And what a good thing this story was! I think I’m going to carry OME with me for the rest of my life. It’s seriously everything I could ask for in a Severitus fic. Harry’s delve into darkness to save Severus was a poetically and powerfully done. I really like your concept of there being a magically tangible bond from Dark Mark to Voldemort. It melds perfectly with canon so it doesn’t leave the audience feeling like you invented new rules for the story’s world. I also especially loved the sort of slow wind-down for the ending. (Not to mention, the heat-pounding excitement of knowing they have to tackle actually defining their familial relationship next, lmao) That after everything, the natural conclusion isn’t some huge moment, but rather the beginning of a new chapter. It’s not a happily ever after where the curtain draws and the story stops.

As an author, you’ve truly taken your audience by the hand and walked with us through this story, through this journey. And although our stroll together has come to an end, we know there will always be more ground to cover. You showed us enough of your world that we can see the horizon too. Thank you for lettIng me into your world. I am truly honored and grateful that you have shared this piece of yourself with us. Thank you for giving me something that, however small, has filled me with joy and hope whenever I thought of it for these last ten years! Thank you for having the courage to share your dreams! I hope that someday soon, I’ll be able to share my own dreams with you as well.

Until that day, thanks for being my Somehow Friend!
mirrormarie chapter 61 . 3/16
This story is just SO GOOD.
Scott Berg chapter 61 . 3/6
Hi, I generally try to read a story and leave reviews at the end unless there's something I really strongly want to review in a specific chapter and I've spent the best part of this week and weekend reading this story and the comments, some good replies. Of course with it being so long and only reviewing at the end you forget to add a lot of what you've enjoyed but here goes.

I'll admit to being a bit unsure at first but it does say slow burn enemy to mentor so that's fair you brought me around with a good story. I loved seeing the relationship slowly changing and growing even if it was exasperating at times, particularly with them both being so stubborn and hating each other to begin with and it was very frustrating in some ways seeing Harry really not putting in the effort to Occlumency or anything like that and being so hopelessly distracted but Severus made a good teacher when he actually put his mind to it (what a difference from canon). Enjoyed seeing him explain and lead him through and of course, Hermione would plunge straight into helping teach him!

I love the humour between them in their cheeky and sarcastic exchanges and Harry's thoughts particularly when he's recovering from his potion induced state, some of the random disconnected things he comes out with and this last chapter how Severus fails to pick up on where Dumbledore's going for so long! he walked right into that one.

In a strange sort of way, I enjoyed the capture and subsequent torture of Harry and Severus, from the absolute depths of despair to waiting to see how they would get out of it and rescue Harry from what was to come. How he threw everything at Harry to break him emotionally, mentally and even a bit physically and yet he overcame his anger and hurt at Severus and all the pain he'd caused him and his family and trusted and forgave him and how Severus returned the trust by rescuing him and looking after him.

I'm glad to see that they managed to make it work and continue building their relationship when back at Hogwarts and that Harry managed to overcome his potions addiction with help and be honest about taking the adder's tongues. I was also waiting and hoping Severus would reassess letting Harry take the Potions NEWT, glad he gave him new glasses, we don't really know how much that affected him in cannon but it seems likely that his glasses won't have done him much good since it sounds like the Dursley's didn't seem to care enough to get his eyes tested properly.

I do feel for Severus having to endure to constant pain from his mark and not totally losing it in classic Snape style, glad Harry wanted so fiercely to try and help him and that he eventually managed to not only take away the pain but sever the connection and remove the dark mark (I do love when that happens). Great description of Harry battling him in his mind.

I'm really glad to see them both develop such a strong trusting and loving relationship, I think they both need it in their own way. They're both more similar than they realise but key moments have shaped them and directed their paths, I think Severus being sorted into Slytherin and not having many true friends except Lily combined with the history of neglect and abuse growing up shaped a lot of his future behaviour and decisions whereas Harry's had more supportive close friends and a wide group of friends/people supporting him beyond that and not just from his own house and he has his parents capacity to love. I think they both need the love that the other can bring even if Severus in particular is less comfortable giving and receiving it.

I do like all the little bits about Lily and Sev and all the keepsakes, particularly that little innocent letter and Hunter

I do hope to see a sequel at some point it would be great but if not you've at least given an idea of what you want to happen, which is good. Anyway, it's a really good story and enjoyed it so thanks
Anna Tihanova chapter 1 . 2/17
Это потрясающая работа! Спасибо огромное дорогой автор!
Лучший фанфик про Северус и Гарри, что я читала.
Это потрясающе!
Я перечитала несколько раз. И каждый раз, просто невозможно оторваться. Волшебно.
Характеры абсолютно каноничные. И это замечательно написано.
Очень жду продолжение, хочется увидеть как будут развиваться отношения опекун/отец/сын.
SeverusPitonIlMagnifico chapter 61 . 1/31
Probably the best ff I have ever read! It was amazing, exceptionally well written and extremely compelling. I am looking forward for the sequel. ;)
BleachedSamurai chapter 61 . 1/25
This story is truly a fantastic read, I love it so much, and I hate that I finished it already. I will be rereading this soon. Thank you so much for sharing. I am now anxiously awaiting the sequel.
BleachedSamurai chapter 30 . 1/21
I'm at the halfway point, and I must say this now, this is by far THE BEST Harry Potter fic I have read in the last two weeks. It's fascinating enough where I'm reading at work! I can't stop. Everything about this is absolute perfection: the pace, keeping the characters in character, especially Severus Snape, the plot, the emotions, the whole shebang. I love this story so much!

I silently squealed at the ending of this chapter. I thought it was sweet after all that intensity.

You are a talented writer. Keep up the magnificent work.
Guest chapter 61 . 1/11
Just finished reading the story for the third time. It is really wonderfully written. It also has a lot of elements that I really like. I especially like the bond that slowly builds between Snape and Harry. It is written very truthfully. I'm hoping for a sequel and really look forward to it!
Greta.1456 chapter 58 . 12/29/2021
I love this series! I hope you’re still writing the sequel to it! It’s hard to find fan fictions as grammatically correct and interesting as this one, and I’m afraid I feel like I’ve struck gold! Thank you for writing this wonderful story.
ChrisUSA chapter 61 . 12/10/2021
Absolutely awesome story
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