|Reviews for Identity I: Draw Phase|
| Guest chapter 21 . 6/27/2015
Your apology made me laugh. Your stories are great, no matter what names you use.
| TheBittenSun chapter 6 . 3/17/2013
I'm little confused about why Mai wants to go to Marks and Spencer. Is it just for the food? Because she definitely won't be buying a high-class, glizty dress for the NYE party from there.
| S. Augustara chapter 3 . 8/11/2012
I just love the Kisara/Seto moments. :)
| Rassilon001 chapter 22 . 1/16/2012
I won’t lie... Monarch makes me think Venture Brothers. Still, he needed –some- sort of name, and the big bad guy is shaping up nicely after the team defeated his number two henchman in the first arc. My money is on it being this Professor Julius fellow.
But this series had me sold the minute we had the odd girl who dreams she is a dragon, as if I need to guess who it is. Beautifully symbolic, and a welcome return to Kisara, AKA Sara Drake. Nice choice of name, to say nothing of backstory. Easily the highlight of this story.
I really like how they actually have a proactive game plan this time around, as opposed to their usual sit back and wait sort of strategy. Putting Rebecca, Serenity, and Duke on the offensive to hunt for Ramses was brilliant done, if largely ineffective.
Ah, a Thiefshipper. I can get behind that one. Very realistically portrayed.
You have an interesting manner of mixing Egyptian mythology (and double kudos on excellent research) with the mythos of the Yu-Gi-Oh franchise. It does raise a lot of questions but overall its interesting and dynamic, and helps set the stage for events to come.
| GoldenGriffiness chapter 9 . 11/25/2011
Awwwwwwww... It took me long enough but I finally get the egg, sorry I haven't reviewed before, I've been reading through both searies rather quickly and was a bit to caught up in the stories to stop XD. You're a fantastic righter! I love these Kasara seens... So my bet is she has a reincarnation... I can't wait to meet her better! Actually, could you PM me? I'd really like some advise on righting the YGO cast.
| Harm Marie chapter 22 . 6/20/2011
| Kurama no Miko2003 chapter 22 . 6/2/2011
I have to give you major major props for using Yuugi's speech pattern as a clue into his mental state in this chapter. It's a concept that's been around a long time in anime and manga, and it's one that not many fanfic writers use correctly. Heck, in the original Japanese, that was one of our clues as to whether Yuugi or Atem is in control - it always bothers me when writers use the wrong "I" pronoun for Yuugi.
I'm really enjoying this series of fanfics. As I was telling a friend earlier, if YGO GX was anything like this, I'd be watching it instead of reading fanfiction!
| Redemption by Fire chapter 22 . 4/17/2011
Wow! I just stumbled upon this story looking for heavy mythology stories to help me through me writers block on my story, and wow! First of all, I must state that while I am not a fan a YAOI and almost didn't read this story due to your warning of such...I think that you made it believable. While I have nothing against YAOI as a concept,(considering I have friends that are gay) almost every story with it in the YUGIOH section is horribly done and almost a mockery of YAOI. So I avoid stories labelled such because they bother me. Yours was tasteful and believable.
I feel like this could be a canon continuation and the attention to detail and character development is an inspiration. I will definately read the rest of the series. I might even go back and read the story that apparently going before this one.
Thanks for a great story!
| Minirowan chapter 22 . 3/9/2011
...I don't know what to say. This was just amazing, simply amazing. I could almost feel the intensity of the situation and the grief everyone felt. I was basically cowed by this story. I don't have much to say by way of criticism or question, especially since I know my questions will be answered soon. Still, I have to say that I was expecting a larger role for Marik and Bakura; maybe I'm speaking too soon. Those two have grown on me via fanfiction, I shoul probably revisit the original source to get a better feel of them though. Also, Sara is a wonderful addition to the cast. I like how you're pairing everyone up, they deserve partners, and Kaiba is high on my list of 'in desperate need of a life'.
I can't wait to read part two!
| Laury the Latrator chapter 3 . 12/19/2010
For someone who's never really understood the whole dueling rigamarole, the fact that this series keeps making me come back for more is rather disturbing. I understand that you're off your Yu-Gi-Oh! kick, but I have to say, if you ever wanted to write some Seto/NewKisara fics again, I'd be behind you 200%. It's honestly my favorite pairing for the entire fandom, and she wasn't even a real modern character. The way you portrayed Sarah (I think, I forget what you called her) was fabulous. She's the best semi-OC ever.
Besides, Kaiba needs some loving ;) and a good fic with that is rare. You are a genius, and... you're awesome... and you're the only author on my Author Alert list because you're the only one great enough for that level of stalking.
| ll Kairi ll chapter 19 . 11/20/2010
*Squeals* I love how Yugi, all serious, said the one word of importance! Aibou! *Squeals!*
| ll Kairi ll chapter 9 . 11/16/2010
I KNEW IT! (I think) The girl is a past life of Blue eyes . . . Ain't she? o.o
| ll Kairi ll chapter 3 . 11/14/2010
Hm . . . The dragon and boy remind me of Blue Eyes White Dragon and Kaiba. I don't know why, but it just does. :/
And i looooove this line!
" Yugi narrowed his eyes. "Leave my hair out of it." "
He's so protective of his hair. I find it rather cute and amusing! XDXD
| Laury the Latrator chapter 16 . 8/25/2010
the thing with bakura and marik has me cracking up! you're definitely one of my favorite authors, both your older works and your newer DP stuff.
| MarauderRaine chapter 8 . 3/28/2009
Poor Serenity. I;d hate to be her. But she really should make a choice.
Valon's back? Another twist in the story!
Good work :)