Reviews for ON THE WAY UP
BonesDBchippie chapter 1 . 5/1/2007

** AS much as it pains me to NOT do a true review...alas, I must remain biased so...

Thank you for your entry into this month's Cullen's Bull-Pen Challenge. Your ff has been read by official (sounds important huh!) April judge: ~BonesDBchippie. Good Luck and hope all your daydreams are filled with B&B "Little Moments"! **

~G :D

[April '07 Judges: BonesDBchippie & Seralis]
redrider6612 chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
Nicely done. You write their dialogue very well. B&B banter is a talent few have mastered, but I think you have.
That Old Black Magic chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
A hot air balloon ride? I love and there so in character. It's being saved to the favs!
BitterKitten chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
Really nice! I love your style of writing - it's so different from most of the other stuff I've read here, but it really fits. I especially liked the line: "But she still felt funky. Bluesy. Depressed." Bluesy is officially my new favourite word to describe feeling off-kilter! And you really nailed Bone's voice (or style of talking, whatever!) as well. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.