Reviews for Alice and Renee go to Big Lots to buy Gnomes
thesunshinekid chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
That's creative!
whiterosesforme98 chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
I loved it. Your writing is actually humorous and not very heavy handed at all. It totally made my day to read this. I hope you do more sorts of things in this kind of genre.

Good luck with your writing!

-WR
Droplets of Salt chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
"..bear my children." Ha! Too funny!
ATangibleEssence chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
More! Must have more! please?
Vicki chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
wow...
Nayame chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
Aw, great XD Poor Alice, that store must be hell to her XD

I like that line "“Impossible. They haven’t. Trust me.”" Very, very, very much. I got a picture of Alice saying that in my head while reading and I fell from my chair because I was laughing so hard XD Great Fic ;)
beautifulCYANIDE chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
Aw, poor Alice.

Having to shop in Big Lots.
alice.redfern chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
It's super funny and I love it!

Poor Alice...I remember visiting my grandma and she would always drag me to the cursed Big Lots...*shudder*

This was a really funny, good, and imaginative fanfiction.

Keep up the good work!
Mineral-Soul-Bottle chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
That was really funny! When you were saying about Renee and the gnomes i was hysterical. will you please continue soon?
TooMuchLoveforEdward chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
Oh, I LOVED IT! hahaha...That guy that worked at Big Lots...ahahaha...I loved Alice's reaction, too!
UnicornGoddess95 chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
Ok so I actually feel sorry for Alice having to grace the isles of Big Lots.

I totally loved the toddler-tantrum-train. So redneck of you!

Alice is used to cold and hard~priceless!

I love the parody, the sneaky hints to so many things!

I'm now off to bury my head in the sand from shame at your grand creation!

Gnomes...lots and lots of Gnomes.
katje13 chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
Very, very funny. I have no words. I am wordless.

Yep, I liked it.
Serser chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
HAHA hilarious, i feel so sorry for Alice though, and come to think of it Bella too, she's had to put up with stuff like that all her life, but at least Renee loves her!
Warui-Usagi chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
LMAO! Ah...that was good. It's a pity that even though both Renee and Alice are obsessed with shopping, Renee's way to stingy to be any fun for Alice. That was great! Awesome even. :) God I love your stuff. Keep up the great work!
MarcyJ chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
Oh my funny friend Roo.

I’m astounded at what you can do!

You blow me away

I just have to say

I'm so thrilled to Beta for you!

The options for presents were small.

Though Renee was having a ball

‘Bargains abound”

Means junk’s all around.

Alice was desperate to get to a mall!

Alice was feeling quite blue

From having to shop at this zoo

She’d ride with a gnome

All the way Home.

What’s a poor psychic to do?
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