Reviews for The Words
claire henry chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
Wow so good. it had the right amount of sadness and joy. and I glad that you made the penvenises have hope and faith even after being away from Narnia and after their fathers' death.
Inactive1357 chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
A nice, well-written story. I like the way you portray Peter's grief- it's not to overdone yet not too underplayed. Thanks for writing this; you did a very good job with it.
headntheclouds chapter 1 . 9/24/2007
Good job. I'd be interesting in seeing this expanded apond. Perhaps with a few one shots?
TastyAsItGets chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
Aw, so depressing. It's a good thing he didn't die in the books, otherwise that would put a damper on the whole series!
Kelev chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
Wonderful! I love your style.
FlyingFaeriesDance chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
I think you did Peter justice. Being the eldest I think Peter would automatically want to take charge. But at the same time want to grieve. This was my favorite line, "I never replaced Dad; I just stood in for him until we could meet again. And Lucy, Edmund, Mum and I did." It gave me a vivid image.