Reviews for Smile
Super Reader chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
aw. that's really cute. I dunno why exactly but it's cute. :)
Darclord chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Seeing Fanny before she got mean was really nice. Great characterization. Great spelling. Great grammer. Great cuteness. What more could anybody ask for? Good one!

Darclord
unifilar chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
This was undeniably, utterly adorable! Thank /you/ for using my idea and making it so great. And I definitely think it was IC, for the reason you stated- Fanny didn't get her sexism and cold exterior until after kindergarten. I particularly love the ending, because I can just picture a younger Hoagie saying and thinking those exact things. You potrayed a child's mind brilliantly, great job. I'm honored such a good writer used my idea. I'm looking forward to more of your work!
December'sRose chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
Aw! That was positivily adorable! I loved it, it made me giggle and it was really cute! Fantastic job, this didn't dissapoint me at all and I really hope you write more 2/86 one shots in the future! D

December'sRose
Teh-Drabbler chapter 1 . 5/1/2007
This was adorable. I really enjoyed it.

"Monkey bars? What monkey bars?" That part made me giggle.