Reviews for Love Can't Last Forever
SuperOreoMan chapter 8 . 8/13/2009
How did Bella see the cloudy sky if she's BLIND? Work on grammer and spelling please. Geeze.
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asterdarling chapter 8 . 9/21/2008
You reviewed my story,so I decided to return the favor.

Great story! It was extremely riveting, and it was different than all the other Twilight fics out there. It kept me on the edge of my seat.

By the way, I updated my story, "Unexpected Visitors".

Great job,

Bookbat4ever chapter 8 . 2/15/2008
I am really excited for the sequel, can't wait to read it
Winchestergurl94 chapter 8 . 1/2/2008
i cant wait for the sequel!
alicelover232 chapter 8 . 5/6/2007
hey ;love your story wh ats the tittle to youyr se qual
Oceano chapter 8 . 5/1/2007
I love your story! And it's okay that you can't write a million pages a day - I can't either;) I did wonder though, how can Bella see the cloudy day but not Edward and Alice?

Keep writing - ur so kewl:)

Love, ...well... me.
savanah13 chapter 8 . 5/1/2007
Great job deborah! i love it but you still might want to seperate the dioluge its kinda hard to follow. SAVANAH
reader101 chapter 8 . 5/1/2007
MartaSwan chapter 8 . 5/1/2007
oohh is so sad that bella is blind...*tear*

post the sequel asap i liked this story


savanah13 chapter 5 . 4/30/2007
its still great deborah keep writing tomarro though u might want to seperate the diolouge! SAVANAH :)
savanah13 chapter 4 . 4/30/2007
this is great deborah keep writin it and FAST! SAVANAH
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