I read this story a few months ago and apparently I didn't review whereas I really love it. It is original and it's difficult for a Veela fiction. Thank you for sharing

EXTREME happiness would be appropriate to describe my adoration for this fic x3 i squealed in happiness, grinned with joy, squirmed with the angst and anxiety, and purely loved every second of it. I literally I believe six or seven hours to finish reading the whole story, my only break to reluctantly eat and finish some homework for class ;P an absolute masterpiece to be reread and cherished for ages to come~!

you are truly amazing

and i love reading all these

and hopefully you'll make more

draco [anyone]

fanfictions

because i'll be reading them

I loved this one as well…I think I might have to go on a binge of your fics in the near future…!

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Bloody wow. Just... Bloody wow. I saw this fiction on a recommendations list, and followed it only to find the link couldn't be found. Half an hour of searching later, I found a passage explaining that Lomonaaeren was somewhat a God among fanfiction writers and a link.

I have to say, I agree. I most definitely agree. This story was so different and more SATISFYING than many Draco-Veela stories I've read, the interaction between the two was brilliant and I got that tingle of butterfly-like happiness in my stomach, which is why I read Yaoi/Slash. And I loved the little dark twists in this plot. To me it made it lose the superficial flavour that many Veela Draco stories have... or simply normal Drarry fictions have, because it was thought out in a way that was almost otherworldly in its originality. Especially how neither Ron nor Hermione were present, and the reason for their abscence... O.O .. Yeah, I cried. And I love the incorporation of Ralph, and for the first time I didn't like Ginny, and, and-

And it was fantastic, that's what. Absolutely, freaking, golden brilliance. I loved every second of this.

I love it

I meant to comment earlier but Ralph's lack of loyalty and obviously jealousy for Harry's wife is just inexplicably saddening to me :/

Although... It did for a second remind me of Ron, but obviously a BILLION times worse. Ron's loyalties, while sometimes murky, have always been clear.

That was BY FAR the best serious veela fic I've read. The struggle was portrayed so well. And I can't tell you how much I love that Harry was saying how content he could always be with Ginny if not happy, and it ends with him saying he's happy with Draco.

Wow! What a fabulous idea :)

I love how well you portray the internal struggle of your characters. You give them such emotional depth that they react to events in a very real and believable manner. Its a pleasure reading a fic that is so well done.

This was my first veela fic. I have never even bothered to read one because they just seemed so cliche'. But I have read some of your other stories and figured I would give it a try. I am so glad that I did because this was truly amazing. There was absolutely nothing cliche' about it.

I stayed up until 5:45 to read this beautiful iece. It's worth it too. Good job. It's a very well written piece

veela are dangerous dark beings...

yet, i love this plot

Well I've read the whole and now I want to see Harry with mpreg of twins... Would make for more interesting reading... I'm sad you ended the story with so left untold...

HORRIBLE

HORRIBLE STORY

HORRIBLE

POOR

GINNY

HORRIBLE STORY

TROLL

ALERT

HORRIBLE

TROLL

ALERT

HORRIBLE STORY

HORRIBLE!