Oh dear lord. Why can't Draco just accept Harry's help and move on? He always has to turn it into a contest

read this years ago, I think on adultfanfiction net and it had me just as hooked the second or probably third time I am reading this now? idk but yeah fantastic story and love how you wrote the characters, very in character from the books especially Draco, most stories tend to either change him completely or he is still to much of a bastard to stomach, this was a good balance

In this story... I admit to partway through just wishing the veela magic thing would fail or something. It just... it was a very well written and convincing story, which is why it hurt to see two caring relationships torn apart.

Perfect, there is nothing more i could have asked of this story. Sublime.

Excellent fic...I really enjoyed it.

Thanks so much!

That was shocking. I never even considered that what Harry confides in Draco/Veela could have happened in any AU or...ever. Brilliant. Not, of course, the fact of Hermione's and Ron's deaths, but your use within this story. I'm still reeling.

Thanks so much!

Hmmm, very interesting start. I'm not sure that the Veela and Draco are actually two separate entities, but I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with this.

Thanks so much!

Wow, what a grate story. i was on the fince a it the begining of it though, having Harry and Draco Marryed. but as it went along it got better, seeing Harrys already failing marige and Dracos loveliss one really made it seem ok.

to be hounest i am perobly to bigest fan of eploges and i cnt think of anything that you left out for the reader to know, shore there is always more someone could write about it but it wouldnt be needed for this story to make it grate.

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Err... Draco? Love? That's the Veela using your natural idiocy and pride to get you to do what it wants -rolls eyes-

Wow, that scene in the bedroom oddly reminded me of Odysseus stuck on Calypso's island. Not only was he desperate to get home to his wife but he was also trapped by Calypso's desires. Here's a request (I wasn't sure if you wanted me to message it or write it in a review): after the war, Harry is desperate to give Ginny another chance and spend time with his godson, Teddy. Unfortunately, he's stuck in Malfoy Manor being pursued by an oddly love struck Draco Malfoy.

This is... gorgeous. That's the best word for it. It shines and ripples like water, it's that bright.

That was very sweet! It was an excellent distraction. Was that one of your first stories? That's crazy. I have been reading your stuff for so long but all of it was relatively new. It's so weird to go back and see the beginning. Great story. Interesting concept and a nice twist on a common plot. As always, keep up the amazing work!

Until next time,
malfoyharry

Great!