Reviews for A Year's Temptation |
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malfoyharry chapter 11 . 2/2/2015 I would like to tell you that I spent all day ready this instead of studying for my two midterms this week. I will not do very well on them now. I can't seem to mind though. I hate school and I love your stories. I hope the next, and last, chapter involves Christmas. It will be December. Until next time, malfoyharry |
malfoyharry chapter 10 . 2/2/2015 Well that's just sad. Harry can't have any friends in the world? He will need someone besides Draco. Hopefully his next partner will be better. They might be able to be friends. Is Harry going to move into the Manor? Will people still agree to guard him there? I assume Snape will come back again soon. Until next time, malfoyharry |
malfoyharry chapter 9 . 2/2/2015 First Tonks and then Snape. I know there was no way for you to know the terrible, gut wrenching way Snape would die but this stings. At least I don't think anyone else who died will be brought up in the last couple chapters. I enjoyed the chapter but I am a little sad that Harry has given in already. I like the lead up to the falling in love. But I guess it had to happen eventually. Until next time, malfoyharry |
malfoyharry chapter 8 . 2/2/2015 Hedwig! That's just too much. I remember why I only read new fanfiction now. So sad! One of the worst, if not, the worst death. If Dobby appears in the next chapter, it will devastating. I liked the chapter though. You are bringing out the Ginny I hate. It's much easier to root for Malfoy this way! Can't wait to see how she responds to the letter. And I wonder if Fleur will talk to Harry again. I guess the only way to find out is to read more! Here I go... Until next time, malfoyharry |
malfoyharry chapter 7 . 2/2/2015 That is beyond sweet. I would love for someone to send me a present that meant that much! It does make Harry's situation a lot harder. I wondered if you would mention his birthday. And you have. It was perfect too. This whole chapter was perfect. So much love. I'm envious of you. You must have felt that to write that. Enjoy it. As I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Until next time, malfoyharry |
malfoyharry chapter 6 . 2/2/2015 Hearing talk of the twins is so sad! They should never have been parted. Kill none or kill them both. It was just so sad. And the ending of this chapter was sad too. I guess that is how you are going to break them up. Sad but at least they both seem somewhat okay. Harry will be noble and Ginny will use he family. Sounds about right. I can't image Harry's next meeting with Malfoy to go well. Until next time, malfoyharry |
malfoyharry chapter 5 . 2/2/2015 Wow. That sounds an awful lot like anorexia. Trying to take control of something when you feel powerless and with something so dangerous. Poor Harry. Being pulled every which way. Life can get confusing. Don't I know it. I definitely have some sympathy for people in that position. I think your really captured how crappy life can get for people. Good job. Hopefully things get better for Harry soon. Until next time, malfoyharry |
malfoyharry chapter 4 . 2/2/2015 Uh oh. This doesn't look good for the wives. I don't see how this story can end well for everyone. Someone is bound to be hurt. I'm usually not a fan of Ginny but in this story she is pretty normal and bearable. I have no ill will for her. I wonder how you will resolve the ending. I really liked this chapter. The plot thickens! Until next time, malfoyharry |
malfoyharry chapter 3 . 2/2/2015 Ginny can't be too impressed. Broken and unable to walk and Harry ditches her for the night. And now something has changed between Harry and Malfoy. How will they keep going? It won't be easy! Until next time, malfoyharry |
malfoyharry chapter 2 . 2/2/2015 You were expecting lots of character death. None of those people actually die, thankfully. That would have been too sad. Not that she didn't decide to kill a ton of other people and animals! I'm still not over some of those deaths! Yours are a lot more gruesome though. So glad that didn't happen. Interesting and very detailed chapter. Harry will still have to go to a game if he wants the story to work. Until next time, malfoyharry |
Articuno chapter 1 . 2/1/2015 That's a stupid idea, Draco. |
malfoyharry chapter 1 . 2/1/2015 I thought I would go back and search through some old stories. I can't wait to read this one. It seems interesting. I like the premise. They will become friends in no time! And then who knows. Until next time, malfoyharry |
Azure.W chapter 12 . 11/28/2014 Dear Lomonaaeren: Before I read this story, I had appreciated a story namedBuilding with worn-out tools in Chinese version(since your story is so great that you should not be surprised it has been spread widely :D ). But at that time, I did not realize who created it. Then suddenly, I found this A year's temptation, and I was just fond of it so much because of its punctilious logic, beautiful words and wonderful plot design. Then I surprisingly discovered you wrote it too. Plus, what I really want to say is that I was really lucky to read your story, especially there is amolst no OOC in it for me! Well...Hardly can I use words to convey my excitement. Finally Draco and Harry can be together, even if there is a long way for them to deal a lot of problems, it doesnât really matter, cuz they just love each other so much-and, there souls have been consummated! You are a great great writer! |
occasionallywrite chapter 12 . 11/1/2014 Such a beautifully-written story. So great! |
Talizora chapter 12 . 10/28/2014 Ahh, that was truly lovely. I'm not a bit fan of Ginny, mostly because I dislike that in the end, Harry married her. So I found it really hard to read in the beginning, but I am very glad I kept going :) Beautiful work, as always! |