WOW! Initital reaction is that this is fabulous and I simply can wait for the next part. I never thought that I would like a draco/pansy or harry/ginny fic but your elaborate plot has made that pain bearable. Some constructive advice is to elaborate on the scenes a bit more, great job with the end and draco's plotting but everything else is a bit skimpy (or maybe Im a bit greedy:}).

Loved it!