Reviews for A Year's Temptation |
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InkedBaby chapter 12 . 8/5/2014 Why do you write Draco so well. No matter how you write him, he's always perfect. I loved him as this possesive, controlling, manipulative person. I honestly did. And I honestly have no clue how you make the wings attractive, but you do. This was so great. Fluer was one of my favorites, i love that she didn't try to sway the situation or manipulate things with her knowledge of veela for Ginnys sake, you really took my by surprise there. Sev as the bad guy though, made me kinda squirmy. I love love love Snape, I reallly wanted Harry to take his offer! Ugh, stinkin Gryffindor. The whole situation going on here was so realistic to read, too. Well, as realistic as it could be with mating and such happening. I was getting so frustrated with Harry for not choosing (Draco, of course) but it makes perfect sense that he would take as long as he did with that decision. That Ralph character? Didn't like him lol. Only because I've never liked Ginny, and his creepy obsession with her made me gag, lol. I really liked how he got her, but you mentioned later that she sort of flaunted him in front of Harry as if she was trying to make him jealous. That was a nice touch. I really like all of the stories I read of yours. You're so good at plot development and detail and its always enjoyable to read. I loved that you came up with your own backstory to this, and made sure to incorporate ot whenever possible. Amazing job, as always. |
Natsumi chapter 12 . 7/28/2014 This was so good! :D And really sweet! I like that you took it slow, and their natural competitiveness was so... right! I loved it, thank you so much for all your effort! |
Meel Jacques chapter 7 . 7/14/2014 Oh, Harry, you're so cute! Adroessa history of hunting and hunter. It's fun, sexy and exciting. :3 |
Meel Jacques chapter 6 . 7/14/2014 Whatever you want to believe, Harry. Keep the holy patience, Ginny. |
Meel Jacques chapter 5 . 7/14/2014 Harry're fooling with that letter! Guys, what was it with Draco! That's amazing! Pansy bitch! Ginny is boring. |
Meel Jacques chapter 4 . 7/12/2014 Wow! That intense! I feel like I want to read more and more and more, but sleep does not leave! |
Meel Jacques chapter 3 . 7/12/2014 Jeez, now things got serious! |
Meel Jacques chapter 2 . 7/10/2014 Ohhh! It's... amazing! This story touched me. Harry suffered a lot and made tough choices. |
Meel Jacques chapter 1 . 7/10/2014 HAHAHHA But I love so much! :3 Delicious! |
spowl chapter 12 . 6/10/2014 I really enjoyed this. I was reading it late into the night and finally had to stop in order to sleep. I love veela!Draco fics, and this was interesting because Draco was stronger than usual. Harry's journey to find himself and someone who can make him happy was great. I even didn't hate Ginny in this. You know who I hated? Ralph! What a jerk. I wish there could be another fic with a pregnant Draco and a chapter for every month of his pregnancy. I would love to see more protective!Harry now that he knows he loves Draco and the veela is his-protecting Draco from all these disapproving people. |
Beth9891 chapter 12 . 5/24/2014 Very sweet ;-) dislike Ginny even though she had valid reason, also his former auror partner is an asshole. But interesting and unique |
TheCauldron chapter 12 . 5/14/2014 *dreamy sigh* |
Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 12 . 4/15/2014 another amazing fic |
Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 7 . 4/15/2014 I cried totally honest it did when Harry got the present |
Venice Riddle chapter 12 . 3/22/2014 I for one really enjoyed this story. The twelve months idea was lovely. All the scenes were well written. Great Emotion. Loved the chemistry between them. |