|Reviews for Mirrorworld|
| karl1n chapter 43 . 11/8
And it ends on a cliffhanger!
| elusivek chapter 43 . 9/5
You sold me Hei/Ed (I don't normally ship any particular pairing)...
I'll be waiting for the next update ;-)
| Amestria chapter 43 . 8/26
Ahh I've been reading this for the past 4 days and this is possibly my most favourite fic in the entire fandom! Can't wait for the end :)
| Acae chapter 43 . 8/12
So, for the past three nights I've been reading this in bed, and I've been staying up until its 3AM and I can't keep my eyes open and have to put it down. This story is incredible, so well written and planned out. I love it so so much. There have been multiple times where I've had to sit up and just stare around my room because I didn't know how to react to something, or turn around and scream into my pillow because wow or oh no or what. I'm so emotionally attached to this story it's unbelievable.
I don't normally like saying this to authors because its annoying and stressful, but because you've said you find it motivating, I'm going to go ahead and say it: please, /please/ update this the moment you get chance. I'm captivated by this story and I'm dying to know how it ends.
This is probably really badly worded but if so, its because its 3AM and I am absolutely blown away by this emotional turmoil of a fic. I could rant and rave about this story forever, but I'm not going to, because quite frankly I'm exhausted.
Wherever you are, whatever you're doing, I hope you're having a good time, and if not, I hope you feel better soon. This fic has made me so happy and you deserve the same happiness in your life for having written it.
And I am going to stop here before I collapse into a puddle of tears and emotion and confess my undying love to your writing skills.
| dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 7/26
Great chapter and plot
| name chapter 43 . 7/24
ive been trapped since 1008
there is no exit
please save my soul
put an end to this fic
| drea ricweld chapter 43 . 7/18
Hmm, where to start?
First of all, let me say that this fiction is THE. BEST. OF THE ENTIRE FMA FANDOM!
I've read many, but this one is so beautiful, so well-written that has wun my resistance to read such long-fics. Its strong points are:
-the plot. Man, I freaking love the plot! You did an amazing job, and it's undeniable the amount of research you did, either for the most scientific chapters -as those placed in America- or for the political ones. I especially loved the building of the three-dimensional array by light!
-the characterization. You managed to make me sympathize with Alfons in a unique way, and even when he- and many other characters- were acting strange, their actions were always plausible.
-the writing! It's so good that it's better than many books I've read, typos were almost absent and you used a great range of words. I admit that, being English my second language, I had to search for the meaning of many words!
-all the angst! Okay we fans have a thing for angsty stories, haven't we? So basically it's an inescapable characteristic. But you conveyed it in a beautiful, sensitive way that made my heart break once or twice.
Want to know the only two things I don't like much about this fiction?
-when Ed and Alfons return to Amestris, why are they so badly disabled?! My sweet children, I was hoping for a joyful reunion ç.ç
-it's unfinished. Please please please, you can't leave me like this!? I discovered this fiction thanks to a beautiful drawing by Uchiha-Umeko on Tumblr, and totally fell in love with it. For the sake of what I consider a masterpiece, please take the time to put an end to this amazing story! I understand you may have lost interest on it, but let me know if you're ever going to finish it.
Anyway, thank you for entertaining me with your beautiful writing. I'm totally gonna read other works of yours! Kudos!
| The Waiting Ninja chapter 43 . 6/29
This has been a long journey and I can tell it's not close to being finished considering what may happen in the next chapter. Hope to see another update soon. You've done a great job!
| inulovegirl713 chapter 43 . 6/21
REALLY, I JUST SOENT THE LAST WEEK READING THIS AMAZING STORY AND YOU LEAVE IT THERE! PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC I AM SORRY FOR YELLING.
| HaltiOvi chapter 43 . 6/16
What can I possibly say?
I have spent the past 3 or 4 days just absorbing and devouring this wonderful fic of yours.
Your writing is such an inspiration to me! You can write drama perfectly, where I'm on the edge of my seat, unable to guess what will happen next. You can write comedy, where I am actually giggling and can't wipe the grin off my face. You can write love and friendships and complex things and it's simply beautiful.
I will eagerly await any update on this fic for eternity if I have to, it's that amazing and I love it so much. You truly have a talent with this and I applaud the length you've written! I love how long it is, as it allowed me to enjoy it for a longer period of time!
Not a single dull chapter as far as I'm concerned! Keep up the good work!
From: a fellow HeiEd shipper and a huge fan of Heiderich in general.
| Guest chapter 28 . 4/12
It would be so awesome if alfons asked ed about if they could be together at his world. And then a month later purpose to ed with flowers chocolate and a engagement ring with each others name on it
| Who knos chapter 43 . 4/4
THIS IS THE WORST PLACE TO DECIDE TO STOP UPDATING YOUR STORY. ITS TOO GOOD TO WAIT. AUGH. I eagerly await the next chapter
| CaptainAlex2014 chapter 43 . 3/28
OMG PLEASE UPDATE ITS BEEN ALMOST HALF A YEAR SINCE THE LAST UPDATE! And you left on a cliff hanger!
| hinatalover445 chapter 43 . 3/13
This story... is beyond anything I have ever read in the Fullmetal Alchemist fanfiction archive, for any continuity. I haven't watched Conqueror in years, and I remember I disliked Ed in that movie for not really seeing Alfons as anything other than a shadow of Al. When I started reading this, I was skeptical because I never really thought Ed felt something more than a hollow love for Alfons, and then I re-watched the movie and saw the look on Ed's face when he saw that Alfons died and I realized that this might actually have been possible if some variant had changed. You keep Ed in character through the changes and make it believable; he eighteen, he has been broken and damaged more times then are healthy for his mental state, and you expand on his guilt and horrible self-esteem and feelings of inadequacy and depression and- well you get the idea.
And Alfons, you turned him into an actual character with his own inadequacy and jealousy and his own life and dreams and make it beautiful and heartwrenching (that may be spelled wrong, stupid auto-correct) and you make their relationship real with fights and arguments and such emotion that I forgot this is a story and became so immersed that I began talking back to my computer at various points. And-
I have so much else to say, but this review has gone on for long enough, so in closing?
I am deeply thankful that you wrote this story and that you continue to write it, you are an inspiration to anyone wondering how to write a masterpiece.
| charmingmetal93 chapter 43 . 3/12
Wow I like don't even have words this fanfiction is amazing! Thank you so much for bestowing this lovely gift to the world. I came to the FMA Fandom a "bit" late, but I am making up for lost time. I haven't been able to put this down since I started reading it. Thank you soooooo much for this, and I shall await the final chapter happily.