This was a lovely little story! I loved reading this and you did a wonderful job on the characters. :)

Good job! Some of the plot points were a bit confusing, but I liked the story overall

Love it!

It was a very interesting story. A little bit confusing at the beginning but more and more exciting. I would say it is a very original fiction !

I was reading the reviews, and I don't understand why people didn't like the story. I felt your story was amazing! I loved reading it. The concept was a little weird but compared to the crazy plot of darling in the franxxs this was great. Though the fact you wrote this in 2010 makes me laugh since it's now 2020. But I loved your story keep up the great work lol. I cried a little so good job :(

I love this so much I'm a writer my self and this is beoned amazing

sooo... what happened to kuuby? did they seal him? If so, wouldn't naruto die since they are connected? you did say that the akatsuki will get the jinishiruki and since the treaty was signed by blood they got him but their goal was to seal the fox so did they change their mind or something?
Sorry, im rambling but im curious!

absolutely beautiful!

Eh it was alright. It was fine up until the point the kyuubi was taken and the forced romance with itachi. I did finish it though, but skimmed read, because it's completed.

it's been over 20 years

he's been gone for almost 10

I hate to say this, but they need to move the heck on

htf do they still remember him... i would imagine his absence lead him to be place in the back of their minds

wow that was unexpected. yet appreciated! nice ending! you built keiji as a great antagonist!

I love this story.

This was somewhat odd but very very sweeeeeet! I like it!

This story was great at the beginning but when the kyung got taken and that experiment shit happened the story got boring. Ehh it's ok

Hello! I just wanted to take a second to say you write awesome stories, and I really enjoy your work.