|Reviews for Intoxication:Chapter 1Childhood|
| MisterBlik chapter 1 . 5/15/2009
Oh my god. This is one of the best FMA fanfics ever (or so I think)
I love this. Its so perverted, vulgar and the pairing is very interesting. I feel sorry for Envy and at the same time I always imagined something like that happened and turned Envy into the monster he is now. The monster I love *hrhr* XD
Anyways, I love how you wrote this chapter.
My favourite parts were:
No one ever touched there, except me of course. And my fucking cock reacted. It got hard on father’s touch and later hard squeeze.
Now I hated myself as wonder mother loved him so much. He probably was a great fuck.
I had to laugh so fucking hard XDD
| TraitorTatara chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
Strange... Twisted... Powerful...
The title certainly suits it. The story itself is intoxicating, leaving you unable to look away or help but wonder what horrors the next chapter will bring.
Sorry if that all sounded like complete crap, but the story is just amazing...
| hiya24 chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
oi, don't think I'd never be able to see Hohenheim as such a sadistic bastard, sorry I liked him, but it doesn't mean that your story wasn't good cause it was good