Reviews for Imperceptible
WritingRin chapter 17 . 7/15/2020
It’s so precious. My little heart!
WritingRin chapter 14 . 7/15/2020
I always enjoy Shippou’s pack instincts. And in this one I enjoyed him and Inuyasha teaming up!
WritingRin chapter 11 . 7/15/2020
Oh what a game. It’s a good game
WritingRin chapter 10 . 7/15/2020
I’m giddy! I love this chapter!
wow chapter 100 . 7/10/2020
omfg, i'm SO glad that i'm not the only person who got to this chapter and thought it was super random and nasty that we find out rin and sesshoumaru were fxcking. if i'd known there was parent/child sex i wouldn't have touched this fic with a ten foot pole. which is really sad, because i genuinely enjoyed it and was touched throughout the 99 chapters before this...weirdness. you legit could have paired sess with anyone else and i wouldn't have cared. i've got no issues with him loving other people or having kids and other relationships. but the fact that you had him end up with Rin just reeks of sexual grooming and an abuse of power of a victim with no where else to go and no one else to turn to. sesshoumaru and rin both deserved better than that. I'd heard that in Unspoiled you paired a child sess with an adult kagome so i didn't read it, but there was absolutely no warning for this in an author's note or the narrative itself. so i just wasn't prepared for this...this.
Guest chapter 100 . 6/29/2020
This was a very beautfully written story. Thank you for sharing.
Pokopi123 chapter 100 . 5/25/2020
Love the ending of this! Thank you for writing yet another amazing piece.
Pokopi123 chapter 79 . 5/24/2020
Cute chapter!
Roxana Miranda chapter 100 . 5/15/2020
I'm read this fic one more time, again, i'dont believe , i liked so very much.
I'm chilean so my english is bad,
Tu historia me ha encantado mucho, desde que empece a leerla que me gusto y ya la he leido mas d veces, es una de esas historias que te mueven a seguir leyendola y que no paras hasta que la terminas. es una de mis favoritas, desde que empece senti al leerla que era diferente a otras, tu forma de escribir le dio un giro a lo que es el anime o la historia de inuyasha en si, la forma en como planteaste la personalidad de sesshomaru fue increible, le dio un giro al papel que realizo y lo mostraste como alguien en proceso de cambios me fascino, gracias por escribirla y espero que estes bien saludos y cuidate,
dreamerkins chapter 100 . 5/10/2020
beautiful story, beautiful ending! !
dreamerkins chapter 99 . 5/9/2020
beautiful, fun, and so many more adjectives, story... this chapter, in particular, held the beautiful.
PinkMochiAndMoonTattoos chapter 100 . 5/7/2020
I literally can not get over this. You really emulated the characters perfectly and made it so that the development was very natural to their personalities. I’m so in love with this fic. Beautifully done. Thank youuuu xoxo
Jean Swift chapter 100 . 5/5/2020
I love your works, reading this again after so many years and it is still just as beautiful.
grrr3c chapter 1 . 5/5/2020
why why why why why why oh Jesus
and I am crying
No tea no shade chapter 100 . 4/26/2020
Stumbled upon this great story after some time in quarantine. Loved everything but the end! I legit can not get over the fact that for 99 chapters there was a build up of the relationship of Sesshoumaru x Kagome and how I was so in love with the plot to only to be confronted with the a Rin x Sesshoumaru. Just gross. I feel that this relationship should just stick to a ward and container relationship, if not father and daughter, to pair them together is just too similar to incest for me. I am fine with ANY one else for a partner. I mean I understand he waited and regarded her for 500 years, so it is understandable he didn't necessarily spend all 500 alone. And another thing, to also say Rin and their children died in a fire? It just seems like a cop-out and an easy way to get rid of whatever would prevent Kagome from being with Sesshoumaru in the future. Otherwise, I loved this fic and how you were able to entrance me for so long with it! Sorry for the semi-hate :/ Here is a heart - 3 Again loved 99% of your story.
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