Reviews for Discovering Fate
TwilightSky15 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
rof! XD the end of the chap was funny! XD
Rax 13 chapter 26 . 4/10/2008
nice, so what's next? :)
Rax 13 chapter 24 . 4/7/2008
This is one of my favorite chapters! :)
Cheza the Flower Maiden chapter 26 . 2/29/2008
Envy and Cheza: XD!

Cheza: That was freakin' hilarious! By the way I vot for the Disney logo.

Envy: (gasp) I vote for John Tucker's thong (any relation to Shou Tucker will be shunned by all of Amestris)
rikufanattic chapter 26 . 2/28/2008
I used the Jenova head censor... I couldn't help myself when I thought about it.

Woot naked Reno goodness!

You did a good job on the chapter buddy!

A couple of typos but that's okay, it didn't take away from the story.
Evil-Sama chapter 25 . 1/6/2008
Woot, loved the chapter; notice a few typos myself but being 'Me' I didn't actually notice them in till I reread my favorite parts. ."

I hope Jackie can handle those five alone, if not she's gonna need some super power individual to come help her.

Joshua- *Cough*

Evil- Your dead.

Joshua- Wait a tick! You said it was temporary!

Evil- I lied.

Joshua- What am I supposed to do here? It's boring with these fluffy clouds and angels!

Evil- What! What! What! Your where?
Cheza the Flower Maiden chapter 25 . 1/6/2008
Oh! What's with the sword? Talk to you at shcool, K?
rikufanattic chapter 25 . 1/6/2008
My brain is hurting... *thinks* But then again so many things are starting to piece themselves into the puzzle, it's weird, no?

Man that makes me want to write, but I'm too lazy at the moment, heh. Great job Xejicka, I just found I think two typos but no biggie. *thumbs up*
EstelleDusk chapter 24 . 12/24/2007
I'm not sure if Reno's dream was a nightmare or not.
rikufanattic chapter 24 . 12/24/2007
rikufanattic: Woot! I love this chapter!

Amaterasu: That's the best dream I've ever had! *glomps Xejicka*

rikufanattic: It had everything you said it would have, the shard of angst, and the crack humor. Poor Reno though... *laughs*

Yuffie: Hello, does the word 'party' mean anything to you guys?

Riku: That's right...

rikufanattic: Kathleen's dream, I love the line Sephiroth says in the last part. I sort of figured that Jessica's and Jackie's argument was based off a real one, it reminds me of the ones my mom and me have too... weird...

Everyone: Great chapter!

Riku: Poor Durus...
Evil-Sama chapter 24 . 12/24/2007
'“You're my bitch, now and forever, Reno,” Fate said with a horrid smile of satisfaction. '

The moment I read that line I kept reading because I had just got up from sleeping. The moment I got down to this line...

'Regular Non-dream Hollow Bastion'

I scrolled as fast as I could back up and reread that line laughing my butt off and fell out of my chair. That was unexpected and gave me a heck of a laugh.

Good Work. Story is getting way better.
Cheza the Flower Maiden chapter 24 . 12/24/2007
Cheza: XD! Really nice. Poor Reno, Good luck with that Kathleen, Very poor Durus, and bad Jessica! She should learn to respect other differences!

Envy: For once I completely agree with you. Oh and Xejicka... Help me! This inhuman thing (like he's one to talk) has a very, VERY MORBID death seen planned out for me! Make her stop! (Cue puppy-dog-eyes)

Cheza: Oh come on! I'm not that bad! (cue malicious smirk)
Cheza the Flower Maiden chapter 23 . 12/19/2007
XD! Nice! Go Axel-kun!
rikufanattic chapter 23 . 12/18/2007
Amaterasu: Aw...

Riku: What?

Sora: You got your butt kicked...

Amaterasu: So she did it out of love!

rikufanattic: And we're gratful that she did it.

Vieh: *coughs* weddings...

Fooby: We've got a wedding to ruin...

Sora: We should put this on the christmas cards...

Amaterasu: Yeah *sarcastic* mom would really enjoy that.

rikufanattic: You guys are weird...

Everyone: We loved the story and enjoy angsty too!
Evil-Sama chapter 23 . 12/17/2007
Perfectly described Vexen, I always try to make him sound col and a man of science but you are x5 better then I at writing him. But for that I write one good Luxord *Grins*
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